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Spring makes everything young again except man.
I went to campus of Sichuan University yesterday. Our first target was looking for a delicious food on my lovely weekend. We had bobo chicken which is quite famous in the west of China, especially in Chengdu and Leshan. During the visit in on campus, we saw many beautiful flowers, all pink, which reminded me of that a single flower does not make a spring. Our spring returns to earth.
After that ,we went to a park next to Jingjiang River. There are were many retired old man men. They were holding a concert when we arrived. I was surprised because their skills is were quite good. So I decided to be an audience, waiting for their last song. I can also play Chinese bamboo flute, but at the basic level. So, I showed my strong interest to do it better. Then,they all loved to teach me. I was so honored to have so many awesome teachers.
By the way, my writing of Chinese "mao bi "is also good.
Spring makes everything young again except us humans man.
I went to campus of the Sichuan University yesterday.__Our first target goal was to looking for a place with great delicious food on for my lovely weekend. [or "for the coming lovely weekend"] Finally, we had the "bobo" chicken, which is quite famous a well known dish in west of China especially in the Chengdu and Leshan areas.__During the our visit in to the campus,_we saw many beautiful flowers,_all drabbed in pink.__which This reminded me of a poetic line, "A single flower does not make a spring maketh/makes".__our Spring is returning to earth.
Then After that,_we went to a park next to the Jingjiang river where there are many retired old men gathered. ,They were holding having a concert when we arrived.__I was surprised because their playing skills is are quite good.__So I decided to be an audience I had become .waiting for and heard their last performance song. I can also play the Chinese bamboo flute,_but the basic at a rudimentary level. ,so i showed my strong interest to do it better ,then,they all loved to teach me,i was so honored to have so many ausome teachers. They inspired me to practise more. They love to show me the techniques and I was so honored to have so many awesome teachers.
By the way, ,my Chinese brush calligraphy writing of chinese "mao bi "is also good. .
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