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My Essay 43 Today I read an interesting article on time.com. The article is about Mrs. Michelle Obama’s recent visit in Beijing and her opinions on study abroad programs and other cultural exchanges. Actually, for the recent years, a huge number of Chinese parents are considering to send their children to the United States for study. Most of these parents are encouraged by the fact that their children can gain more opportunities after they study abroad. It is reported on CCTV news a few months ago that the number of Chinese students returned to China for work after they graduated from their universities in the United States reached a peak in the last year. For the ordinary students, their abroad learning experience will make them more competitive in job application than their rivals who received education in some not prestigious university in China. This is because many Chinese people think the education in the United States is very great and so those Chinese students who have spent their college time there must be excellent. Although the fact is that some of these students are not excellent at all. For instance, one of my dad’s colleagues said that her daughter hardly speaks English when she studied in the United States because there are so many Chinese students all around the campus and inside the classroom! Certainly, there are many other reasons which inspire Chinese students to seek for education in the United States. For me, spending my high school life in a beautiful town would be wonderful. I will also have more chances to participate in extracurricular activities to enrich my life. More importantly, I will be able to make friends with many people from different countries and constantly get new ideas by being with them, this would enlarge my horizon toward the world. In China, however, many students are expected to spend most of their time studying for long hours every day, which followed by the lack of sport exercise. Some interesting courses like Psychology and Computer Science are not offered in Chinese high schools. To make it worse, Chinese students cannot even find accesses to local libraries in some communities.

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My Essay 43

Today I read an interesting article on time.com. The article is about Mrs. Michelle Obama’s recent visit in Beijing and her opinions on study abroad programs and other cultural exchanges. Actually, in the recent years, a huge number of Chinese parents are consider to sending their children to the United States for study. Most of these parents are encouraged by the fact that their children can gain more opportunities after they study abroad. It was reported on CCTV news a few months ago that the number of Chinese students who returned to China for work after they graduated from their universities in the United States reached a peak in the last year. For the (The isn't needed here. Though I don't think it's wrong) ordinary students, their abroad learning experience will make them more competitive in job application than their rivals who received education in some not prestigious university in China. This is because many Chinese people think the education in the United States is very great and so those Chinese students who have spent their college time there must be excellent. Although the fact is that some of these students are not excellent at all. For instance, one of my dad’s colleagues said that her daughter hardly spoke English when she studied in the United States because there were so many Chinese students all around the campus and inside the classroom!

Certainly, there are many other reasons which inspire Chinese students to seek for education in the United States. For me, spending my high school life in a beautiful town would be wonderful. It will also give me more chances to participate in extracurricular activities to enrich my life. More importantly, I will be able to make friends with many people from different countries and constantly get new ideas by being with them, this would enlarge my horizon toward the world. In China, however, many students are expected to spend most of their time studying for long hours every day, which is followed by the lack of sport exercise. Some interesting courses like Psychology and Computer Science are not offered in Chinese high schools. To make it worse, Chinese students Do not even Have accesses to local libraries in some communities.(Alternatively, "Chinese students cannot even find local libraries in some communities.")

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By the way, I laughed when I found how the writer described some pictures painted on the walls in Chinese schools. The writer said “The walls are decorated with murals glorifying both Euclid and Karl Marx”. It reminds me of my life at elementary school. During that time we could find some funny pictures on the wall composed by colorful bricks to advertise socialism……

The writer of the article said Mrs. Michelle arrived in Beijing under rare unpolluted skies, Actually, the air conditions in Beijing are as nothing compared with those in some less-developed areas in China. I remembered the sky was blue and the air not so dirty when I was in Beijing for the 29th Olympics in 2008. Though I found the air conditions there had been decreased so much this January when I was in Beijing for my interviews, the fresh air seems like people’s faintest memory in some small cities in China. For example, farmers in some villages are even using the primordial method to handle with hollow stalks by just firing them in the fields! In China, the smog emitted by cars is even without a thoroughgoing purification!

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My Essay 43

 

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Certainly, there are many other reasons in which there are to inspire others for this kind of overseas education.Chinese students to seek for education in the United States. As for me, spending my high school life in a beautiful town would be not be only wonderful but in contentment since. I will also have more chances to participate in extracurricular activities there are many other ways to enrich my life. More importantly, I will am still be able to make friends with many people [你可以也跟海外動物做朋友嗎?] from different countries all over the world and constantly get new ideas. by being with them, this would enlarge my horizon toward the world This would definitely help both of us to enlarge our horizons. In China, however, many students are expected to spend most of their time in studying for long hours every day. which followed by the lack of sport exercise They are not getting any brawn in just by being bookworms. Some Interesting courses like psychology and computer science are not offered in Chinese highschoolshigh schools. To make it Worse still, Chinese students cannot [這样說法是学生不可以, 但其他人就可以] even find accesses no such resources in many to local community libraries in some communities.

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