Spring coming.
It's getting warm in Tokyo in these days. Maybe end of March or early April we can enjoy "hanami". We enjoy cherry blossom blooming all around Japan, it's so beautiful. Everyone coming to Japan must see it. And also all Japanese are moving to see it and it will be a time of sightseeing, everywhere will be clouded, you must prepared of it.
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Spring is coming.
It's getting warmer in Tokyo these days.
Maybe by the end of March or early April we can enjoy "hanami".
We enjoy seeing cherry blossoms bloom all around Japan because they are so beautiful.
Everyone who comes to Japan should get the chance to see them!
Even all Japanese people are exploring hoping to see them.
Spring is a time of sightseeing so everywhere will be crowded and you must be prepared for it!
Nice job! (I just corrected a few things and reworded a few sentences to make them sound more natural) :)
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