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Hi.

I need to write about the diffrents from Chienese and western gardens, here follows what I wrote and my thoughts are written briefly under each sentence, please help me and correct me if you find any misstakes.


南方私家园林与北方皇家园林在建筑规 模和风格上有什么不同？

     北方园林，一般规模宏大，气势雄伟。他们是皇家建筑，朝廷修建的园林。如颐和园，承德避暑山庄。

     南方园林，一般是私人住宅，南方的园林，是建古代文人学士修身养性的地方。这里他们可以远离城市的喧哗，闲适自娱。

The imperial parks are built in a grand and spectacular style and are located mostly in north China, such as the Summer Palace in Beijing and Chengde 

Private gardens are mostly found in south China, Private gardens were designed and created as a place of retreat for the ancient scholars to escape the chaos of the city and have private relaxation.

中国古典园林和西方古典园林有什么不同？

     中国古典园林跟西方古典园林有不同的地方。中国的古典园林是再现自然山水式园林。中国古典园林将人工美和自然美巧妙的结合起来，从而做到“虽为人做，宛如天工”。反映出一种充满生机和活力的形式。

     西方的想法跟他们不一样，觉得自然不是不可战胜的。西方哲学家认为他们可以征服自然，强调人的力量。因此西方的古典园林一切纳入严格的几何关系中去，凸显人工建造，强调人工美。展现对称的园林布局，体现其园林艺术的整齐性，准确性以及统一性。



Chinese classical gardens, also known as landscape gardens, focus on the beauty of nature. Chinese classical gardens combine the artificial beauty and natural beauty subtly, to create the effect that “although made by mankind, it seemed created by God”, which reflect a style full of fun and liveliness.

The Western  traditional natural Philosophy believes that man can conquer nature, emphasizing the power of people. So Western-style gardens pay attention to architectural order and organization of geometric patterns, presenting the style of uniform layout and order. With neat, precise, and uniform expression of art,

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Hi.

I need to write about the differences from Chienese and western gardens. Here follows are my thoughts of what I wrote and my thoughts are written briefly under each sentence. Please help me and correct me if you find any misstakes.

What you have written in Chinese does not match your English.  So I translated what was written in English instead.

南方私家园林与北方皇家园林在建筑规
模和风格上有什么不同？

北方的园林的样子，一般是式大大还有壮观。他们是对皇家建筑，比如说颐和园还有城的园林。他们的。

南方园林，一般是私的，南方的园林，是建筑为了给老师休息。这里他们可以就到，热闹的城市还有休闲。

The imperial parks are built in a grand and spectacular style and are located mostly in north China, such as the Summer Palace in Beijing and Chengde 

御林园建筑雄偉壮观, 大都座落中国的北方, 例如北京的颐和园與熱河的避署山莊.

Private gardens are mostly found in south China, Private gardens were designed and created as a place of retreat for the ancient scholars to escape the chaos of the city and have private relaxation.

私园的大部份可在南方多見. 是為書生秀才的桃源世外理想, 逃出紅塵世俗的壓倦, 而因為此設計与創造.

,中国古典园林和西方古典园林有什么不
同？

中国园林跟南方的园林有不同的地方。比如说中国的园林，瞩目如果自然是不是美丽。中国园林联合不自然和自然的美丽，因为他们想给你想法这是被圣地做的。

西方的想法不一样他们，觉得自然不是一个神的东西，他们觉得我们已经征服自然，所以他们想给我们一个被人民非常好的样子。他们的园林是非常图的园林。比如他们的园林瞩目建筑学还有有几何图案。他们想给你精确的园林，跟精确的树还有灌木。



Chinese classical gardens, also known as landscape gardens, focus on the beauty of nature.

中式古典庭园亦称景觀庭园, 以自然之美為重.

Chinese classical gardens combine the artificial beauty and natural beauty subtly, to create the effect that “although made by mankind, it seemed created by God”, which reflect a style full of fun and liveliness.

它為人造與天然之美合一, 虽出於凡夫之手, 其美為上蒼之作, 顯之其樂趣与活力

The Western t traditional natural Philosophy believes that man can conquer nature, emphasizing the power of people.

西方自然哲學以人可克大自然的想法來首重人類的威力.

So Western-style gardens pay attention to architectural order and organization of geometric patterns, presenting the style of uniform layout and order.

因此西式重視建築秩序, 以几何形式, 以清一色格局与秩序為表.

 With neatness, precision, and uniformity to expression of art.

以整齐楚楚, 精确确与划一一來代表艺术.

home work

Hi.

I need to write about the diffrents from Chienese and western gardens, here follows what I wrote and my thoughts are written briefly under each sentence, please help me and correct me if you find any misstakes.


南方私家园林与北方皇家御林园的林在建筑规模和风格上有什么不同/異別？

北方的园御林的样子，一般是式大大还有雄偉壮观。他们是对皇家建筑，比例如说颐和园与熱河的避署山莊还有城的园林。他们的。

南方园庭 [Can't use 林 because it is non-imperial.  Treasonous if the legal limit is exceeded.] 林，大一般是私人住宅的，南方的园林，是建筑为秀才之幽閑世外桃源而避開世俗喧华了给老师休息。这里他们可以就到，热闹的城市还有休闲。

The imperial parks are built in a grand and spectacular style and are located mostly in north China, such as the Summer Palace in Beijing and Chengde 

Private gardens are mostly found in south China, Private gardens were designed and created as a place of retreat for the ancient scholars to escape the chaos of the city and have private relaxation.

中国古典园林和西方古典园上林园有什么不同？ If you are not referring to imperial styles, then use 园式 instead (garden styles).  When you use forest, 林 it either means imperial or nobility.  Even the official classes cannot have this title unless, special favour bestowed by the emperor.  Since you are writing in Chinese, you need to be aware of the cultural differences.  Just translating from one language with the cultural context on such things is a very dangerous path since, you may be thinking of one thing, the reader has a different picture and causes confusion.

中国园林跟南方的园林有不同的地方。Your question asks for the differences between East and West imperial gardens but this sentence states that there are differences between northern and southern Chinese garden styles.  Then you start to talk about the Chinese philosophy on garden styles.  Quite confusing. 比如说中国的园式林，若不是自然美丽为先/首/重 即不能算得为锦绣, 景美要透出神圣之手工瞩目如果自然是不是美丽。中国园林联合不自然和自然的美丽，因为他们想给你想法这是被圣地做的。

西方的想法不一样他们，觉得自然不是有一个神圣的东西，要表出人类能他们觉得我们已经征服大自然的威力，所以他们想给我们一个被人民非常好的样子。他们的园林是非常图的园林。比如他们的园林瞩目建筑学还有有几何图案。他们想给你精确的园林，跟精确的树还有灌木。 All these, I don't understand what you are trying to say and therefore cannot correct.  This is because you said what you wrote in English is not the same as in Chinese.  You have to write in simpler English if you wanted to know how precisely to express in Chinese.

Chinese classical gardens, also known as landscape gardens, focus on the beauty of nature. Chinese classical gardens combine the artificial beauty and natural beauty subtly, to create the effect that “although made by mankind, it seemed created by God”, which reflect a style full of fun and liveliness. The Western t traditional natural Philosophy believes that man can conquer nature, emphasizing the power of people. So Western-style gardens pay attention to architectural order and organization of geometric patterns, presenting the style of uniform layout and order. With neat, precise, and uniform expression of art,