every young man wants
Every young man wants to live independently. And I'm not an exception. Of course, the time will come, when I will alone in my flat. I wait for this moment and imagine, that my new flat will be at least three roomed. There will be a study, a bedroom, a dinning-room.
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What Every Young man Person Wants [You are a woman and using the male form confuses the reader, this way, the gender is avoided]
Every young man person [You should use 'woman' if you don't want to avoid gender neutrality] wants to live independently. and I'm not an exception. Of course, the time will come, when I will be alone in my flat. I await for this moment and to imagine, that my new flat will be at least have three rooms, There will be a study, a bedroom, and a dinning-room.
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Very nice! I also have the dream. But in China buying a plat is extremely difficult, usually the price of a flat per square is three or four times than salary. The Chinese young men struggle their whole life just for one flat.
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