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How to Forget the/Erase the Bad Memories (?)
Bad memories are associated with unhappiness and, understandably, (make) people (feel unhappy and then people) try to forget them. Conversely, (In other words,) good memories can evoke a feeling of happiness. (make people feel happy.) You can't just forget bad experiences (memories) right away (now), it takes time. (If) We can help the healing process along (people) by forging (create) positive/fulfilling experiences for others/our loved ones, (good memories), so they (could) become more at peace. (happy.) The more good memories you foster (create), the happier/more contented they will be with their quality of life. (become.) So, if you love someone, your parents, your kids, your partner(s), your friends and so on, please remember to create some memorable experiences (good memories) with them. :D
Good article, Melanie. We always use initial capitals in the title so that it carries more prominence. I think, after reading your essay, you are suggesting an answer, so your title needs to be more of a statement rather than an open question. You have a good feeling to your writing and it was well thought-out. The only issue I would suggest is with trying to vary your wording. In English, it always reads better if you can use alternative words/phrases as it shows a good command of the language. So, to improve this essay I would suggest it best to try to avoid using the same words/phrases as much as possible - i.e. 'happy' 'good memories' 'create'. It is difficult, I know, but I have suggested a few alternative words/phrases you might use. Hope this is of help.
How to forget the bad memories?
Bad memories make people feel unhappy and then people try to forget them. In other words, good memories can make people feel happy. You can't just forget bad memories right now, it takes time. If we can help people create good memories, they could become happy. The more good memories you create, the happier they will become. If you love someone—your parents, your kids, your partners, your friends and so on—remember to create good memories with them. :D
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