Seeking for friends!!! (Three exclamation marks are ok in an informal online context, but don't do it in the IELTS or in academic writing.)

I have about four (This is better that "4" for IELTS and academic writing.) months left to take the IELTS test for studying aboard, which is a short period for me to improve my English, in particular my oral English. Therefore, I'm very eager to find friends who can help improve my oral English in these four months. Of course, we can keep in touching after that.
I hope anyone who wants to be friends or learn Mandarin or Cantonese contacts me immediately. Skype, Line, Whatsapp or other social apps are more suitable for having a chat! I'll be grateful!! (Again, only one exclamation mark for the IELTS or academic writing.)

Hi Alan,

I've corrected this with the IELTS and formal/academic English in mind because you've said that was your goal. There are some things that are acceptable online or in text messages that are not acceptable in other contexts.  Be careful with these though because many native speakers find them irritating. Please be careful to put one space after a punctuation mark and no spaces before. I think this sometimes seems like a very small thing to people who are used to a different script but it is very obvious to a native speaker and looks particularly bad in academic writing and formal writing. I can help you prepare if you like. Send me a message.

Best wishes,

Katherine

Seeking for friends!!!

It's about 4 months left to until I take the IELTS test for studying aboard, which is a short period of time for me to promote imrove my English, in particular my oral English. Therefore I'm so eager to find friends who can help my oral English during these four months. Of course, we can keep in touching after that.
I hope that someone who wants to be friends or learn Mandarin or Cantonese, will contact me immediately. Skype, Line, Whatsapp or other social apps which are more adaptable to have a chat! I'll be grateful!!