Project 34365: part 94
(九十四/三百六十五）
今天是二〇一四年三月七日。
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我是胖子。
我想减肥但我买了另一干酪饼。
我吃了干酪饼和我是更多如今胖。
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Project 34365: part 94
(九十四/三百六十五）
今天是二〇一四年三月七日。
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我是个胖子， 我想减肥！
但我却买了块干酪饼来吃。
结果是我更加胖了……
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Project 34365: part 94
(九十四/三百六十五）
今天是二〇一四年三月七日。
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我是[个]胖子。
我想[要]减肥但是我买了另一斤干酪饼。 [Did you mean you just bought another pound? LOL or just another piece, 塊]
我吃了那塊干酪饼和我是更多如今更胖了。[OK Now I get it!]
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Project 34365: part 94
(九十四/三百六十五）
今天是二〇一四年三月七日。
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我是胖子。
我想减肥,但我买了另一干酪饼。
我吃了干酪饼,和我是更多如今胖。如今我更胖了
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Project 34365: part 94
(九十四/三百六十五）
今天是二〇一四年三月七日。
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我是胖子。
我想减肥但我又买了另一个干酪饼。
我吃了干酪饼后我会比如今更加胖。
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Y don't you write Chinese and English at the same time. Then we will know what you are talking about! Otherwise it is hard for Chinese to correct for you! Don't you think so?
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