This is a good night

Do Did you know, it is last night was my first time to make making a foreign friend last night. Her name is Trần Phạm Thanh Tâm, a beautiful girl come from Vietnam. Her English is very good.She have has a beautiful dream of studying in Austrilia. I believe that her dream will become an actuality. Joel Thomas Thomas,another foreign friend of me mine told me that don't be not to be afraid to say the wrong thing when speaking English, because speaking more is how me I become better. Although the communication between us is Although we have only talked a little bit, but I think we have been become good friends.

This was a good little story, you've only made a few mistakes. They tend to be the same mistake.
The main issue is with tense. It may help to try to really think whether the what you're talking about has already happened, is happening now or is going to happen.
Once you've decided this, you may need to change certain words to suit the tense.
If you need help with this, ask me right away!