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Today I Am So Sad
Along with time, my grandpa's memory is worse and worse, he doesn't like moving, and rarely speaks with us.
Today, when we finished dinner, my grandpa told us that he would wash the dishes, because he so love (loves) I (me) and my little sis that he doesn't want us to do housework. but he just wash (washed) the dishes only once, I felt surprised and ask (asked) him why he only wash(washed) one time, it's not clean, he is (was) at a loss what to do, looked at his eyes, I feel(felt) so sad.
When I was a little girl, my grandpa always rode bike with me to go everywhere. Though he earned little money, he would like (to) buy anything (what)I want. when he was young, he loved sports very much, He was a good basketball player, but now he even doesn't like to walk. He loved gardening, he had a small garden before, but now he is too weak to take care of the flowers and the trees. When I think about that, I'll be cry.
I hope he is always health, blessing him! I love you so much!
(Thank you for correcting, if you need help, I'll be there for you!
xie xie ni de xiu gai, ru guo ni xu yao bang zhu, wo ye hui hao hao bang ni. O(∩_∩)O谢谢)
Today I Am So Sad
Along with Time passes and my grandpa's memory is getting worse and worse. He does not like to move about moving, and rarely speaks with us.
Today, when we finished dinner was done, my grandpa told/declared/informed us that he would wash the dishes, because he so loves I and my little sister and I so much that he doesn't want us to do the washing. housework. but However, he just gave wash the dishes only once over. I felt surprised and asked him why he only wash one time, it's since the dishes would not be clean. He is was at a loss. what to do, Looking into at his eyes, I feel felt so sad.
When I was a little girl, my grandpa he would always rode bike ride the bicycle with me to go everywhere. Though he did not earned little money much, he would like to buy me anything I wanted. When he was young In his younger days, he loved sports very much. He was A good basketball player he was, but now, he even does not like to walk. He used to loved gardening, he had and kept a small garden before but now, he is too weak to take care of the flowers and the trees. When I think about this that, I'll be cry a tear or two will be lingering in my eyes.
I hope that he will still have his is always health. , Blessing him! I love you him so much!
(Thank you for correcting. If you need my help, I am 'll be there for you!
xie xie ni de xiu gai, ru guo ni xu yao bang zhu, wo ye hui hao hao bang ni. O(∩_∩)O谢谢)
谢 谢 你 的 修 改, 如 果 你 須 要 幫 助, 我 也 会 好 好 幫 你.
Today I Am So Sad
After a long amount of time, my grandpa's memory is becoming worse and worse. He doesn't like moving, and rarely speaks with us.
Today, when we finished dinner, my grandpa told us that he would wash the dishes, because he loves my little sister and I, and he doesn't want us to have to do housework. But he washed the dishes only once, I felt surprised and ask him why. I told him it's not clean, but then he didn't know what to do. He looked confused, and it made me feel sad.
When I was a little girl, my grandpa always went on bikerides with me everywhere. Though he earned little money, he bought me anything I wanted. When he was young, he loved sports very much. He was a good basketball player, but now he even doesn't even like to walk. He loved gardening; he had a small garden before, but now he is too weak to take care of the flowers and the trees. When I think about that, It makes me cry.
I hope that he is always healthy and blessed! I love you so much, grandpa!
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