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Mountain Hua(华山)
Climbing Mountain Hua was one of my dreams when I was little and It was done last summer, now this is a new year and a new beginning, I'd like to summarize that trip of climbing Mountain Hua.
Even I was preparing my final exam in college I had started to organize this trip. Everything was going well, my friends in Xi'an were so excited to get my invitation that promised they would go with me when I finished all of my exams and went home. I was very happy when I got their messages ,thanks to that my exams got very good results.
three days later I backed home that made my parents very happy, and they gave me their total support to my trip. First of all I needed to contact with my friends and made a final date to climb mountain together,then we needed a meeting.
Everything was perfect and I thought this plan would be executed very soon, but there were some problems occurred that almost destoryed the whole plan. because my friends' parents didn't think it was safe and they all made compromise to their parents by quiting this trip.
I have to say that I was so disappointed, I was the only one who had been fighing. I had to go climbing on my own and I also needed some money .
After doing three weeks part-time job I saved some money and my mother gave me 500,these should be enough. Finally I started my journal.
My time was limited so I had to get there by high-speed rail and that's what I planed and that's waht I did. The ticket I bought form Northern train station of Xi'an to Huan Shan, it cost me fifty yuan, much more cheapper than I thought and it just took me thirty minutes to get there. That was so cool and I found a hotel.
To be continued......
As my time was limited, so I had no choice but to get there by high-speed rail. and that's what I had planned for this and this was what and that's waht I did. The ticket I bought form price for the northern train station of Xi'an to Huan Shan, it costs me fifty yuan. It was much more cheapper than I thought/had anticpated/ and just took me me half an hour thirty minutes to get there. That It was so cool! and I found a hotel. [Should omit this give the piece a cliffhanger.]
To be continued......
Your photo reminded me of this song,
太華山峯五千仞, 西嶽自古是山神. 烟霧飄渺繞古廟, 廟中聖母艷如生.
聖母深居神仙府, 洞中歲月萬年身. 長理天庭二郎神, 震武威界仙遊巡.
兄有威武妹青春, 可憐不能到紅塵, 只有仙女相依伴, 長長修煉宝蓮灯.
Everything was see to be going well good and I thought this the plan would be executed realized very soon. but there are some problems However, there were kinks that may destory the whole entire plan. those There were some parents of my friends didn't allow them to go who did not approve of the climbing because they don't think as they believe the trip was not it is safe. Hence they had no choice but to back out. and my friends they all made compromise with their parents by quiting this trip.
I have Needless to say, I was so disappointed. Still I am was the only one who was still kept on fighting for my idea even though if I had to go climbing individually the mountain all by myself. Of course, there was the problem of funds and I need money too.
After a three weeks part-time job, I got some money was able to squirrelled enough and an additional fund of Y500 from my mother give me 500,these should be was enough to embark on my dream. Finally! I was going to go Climbing here I come!
Mountain Mt. Hua(华山)
Climbing Mountain Mt. Hua was a childhood dream of mine. Finally, one of my dreams when I was little and It was done last summer I was able to realize it. , now this is a The New Year had begun; and a new beginning, and so I'd would like to narrate my climb of Mt. summarize that trip of climbing Mountain Hua.
Even as I was preparing my final college exams, in college I had started planning for to organize this trip. Everything was going well, and my Xi'an friends in Xi'an they were so very excited to get my invitation. that promised They will go with me promised that when I am done with finish all of my exams we all would have a great time. and back home. I was very elated when their replies came. For this, happy when I got their messages ,because of that I had great scores for my exams had a very good result.
When I backed returned home three days later, that made my parents were very happy to see me and to know that I had done so well with my exams that, and they fully give me their totally supported about my my trip. First of all I needed to contact all my friends first and made to finalize a final date to climb mountain together, we need the climbing date in a meeting.
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