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白腰雨燕 Nov 20, 2010 十一月二日,在市街上,有一只白腰雨燕滑翔的。白腰雨燕的特点是翅膀比一般的燕子的太长的。它滑翔的时候,把翅膀伸的弓形。 Fork-tailed Swift Apus pacificus One Fork-tailed Swift glided above urban district on Nov. 2nd. The characteristic of Fork-tailed Swift is much longer wings in comparison with common swallow. When it glides, it stretches the wings like a bow.

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白腰雨燕 Nov 20, 2010

十一月二日,在市街街市(或者说,城市的街道,市街也看得懂,但是很少这么说)上,有一只白腰雨燕在滑翔的。白腰雨燕的特点是翅膀比一般的燕子的太长的更长。它滑翔的时候,把翅膀伸的弯成弓形。
(“弯”,弯成弓形,弯曲;“伸”,一般用伸直,刚好与弯相对)

Fork-tailed Swift
Apus pacificus
One Fork-tailed Swift glided above urban district on Nov. 2nd. The characteristic of Fork-tailed Swift is much longer wings in comparison with common swallow. When it glides, it stretches the wings like a bow.


Hiromiさん认得白腰雨燕哦,我还是第一次听说,长知识了。
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白腰雨燕 Nov 20, 2010

十一月二日,在市街上,有一只白腰雨燕滑翔的。白腰雨燕的特点是翅膀比一般的燕子的太长的。它滑翔的时候,把翅膀伸的弓形。
十一月二日,在街市上,有一只白腰雨燕滑翔而过。白腰雨燕的特点是翅膀比一般的燕子更长。它飞翔的时候,把翅膀弯成弓形。


Fork-tailed Swift
Apus pacificus
One Fork-tailed Swift glided above urban district on Nov. 2nd. The characteristic of Fork-tailed Swift is much longer wings in comparison with common swallow. When it glides, it stretches the wings like a bow.
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白腰雨燕 Nov 20, 2010

十一月二日,在市街上,有一只白腰雨燕滑翔的。白腰雨燕的特点是翅膀比一般的燕子的太长的。它滑翔的时候,把翅膀伸的弓形。

白腰雨燕
十一月二日,

在市街上,

有一只白腰雨燕在滑翔。

它们的特点是翅膀比一般的燕子长,

不是一般的长,

那时,

翅膀伸的像弯弓一样。

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Thank you very much for your message, I am going to study harder.
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my first time to modify someone's chinese composation, so excited :) hope you can imrove your chinese

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