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Be my Valentine ! 14th February, I don't know if in your city or country is the same stupid caos , that means no taxis because is full of lovely couples with teddy bears and roses and chocolates all together in a sticky mix of love or something worse no hotels no restaurants no nothing ok , take a dvd and run at your home because today the city is full of lovers, like a zombies, maybe all the year these couples fought one each other but today they need to go and spend all the money that can hide all these holes in their relationships, so the simple and no loved mortal could be looked like a poor single person with out love, well no way I am fell really happy spend my money in my lover, my self !

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Be my Valentine !

14th February, I don't know if in your city or country it's the same stupid chaos , that means no taxis because is they're full of lovely couples with teddy bears and roses and chocolates all together in a sticky mix of love or something worse, no hotels, no restaurants no nothing ok , take grab a dvd and run to  your home because today the city is full of lovers, like a zombies, maybe all the year these couples fought one each another but today they need to go and spend all the money that can hide all these holes in their relationships, so the that a simple and no unloved mortal could be looked looks like a poor single person without love, well, no way! I am feel really happy spending my money in my lover, on myself !

 

 Well done, any corrections are only slight, I understood you perfectly.

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Be my Valentine !

14th February.  I don't know if in your city or country it is the same stupid chaos: that means no taxis because is they are all full of lovely loving couples with teddy bears and roses and chocolates all together in a sticky mix of love or something worse; no hotels; no restaurants; no nothing!  OK, take get a dvd and run at your home, because today the city is full of lovers, like a zombies.  Maybe all the year these couples fought one each another, but today they need to go and spend all the money that can to hide all these holes in their relationships, so the that a simple and no unloved mortal could be looked looks like a poor single person with out without love.  Well, no way!  I am fell feel really happy to spend my money in on my lover, that is my self!

 

I am not going to correct the double negative "no nothing." I think it is perfectly appropriate for the style of the notebook entry.

I have similar feelings about a day when you feel forced to spend things on your "lover."  Those of us without a steady partner can feel left out.

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Be my Valentine!

14th February. I don't know if in your city or country is in the same stupid chaos, that means no taxis because is they are full of lovely couples with teddy bears and roses and chocolates, all together in a sticky mix of love or something worse, no hotels, no restaurants, no nothing. ok , take Rent a dvd and run at your home, because today the city is full of lovers, like a zombies,. And they're like zombies (it's good to mix in shorter sentences to vary rhythm). Maybe all the year these couples fought one each other all year, but today they need to go and spend all the enough money that canto hide all these holes in their relationships, so the simple and no lovedunloved mortal could be lookedlooks like a poor single person with outwithout love, well. Well, no way - I am fellfeel really happy spending my money in on my lover: myself!, my self !

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Be my Valentine !

14th February, I don't know if in your city or country it is the same stupid chaos caos , that means no taxis because is they are full of lovely couples with teddy bears, and roses, and chocolates all together in a sticky mix of love. Or or something worse: no hotels, no restaurants, no nothing. Okay, ok , take a dvd and run at your home because today the city is full of lovers, like a bunch of zombies. Maybe maybe all the year these couples fought one each other, but today they need to go and spend all the their  money to that can hide all these holes in their relationships. In the meantime so the simple and no loved unloved mortal could be looked upon like a poor pathetic loser. single person with out love. Well well no way! I feel am fell really happy to spend my money on in my lover: myself my self !

 

Now, Ingrid, don't let it get you down. The right guy will come along when you least expect it! Ciao.

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