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I went shopping with my two best friends the last weekend we were at the mall looking at the most beautiful dresses of all, the sexiest swimwear to dress them in the next vacation. My friends and I bought enough shoes for the rest of the year, hehehe. at the end of the afternoon we were exhausted by the shopping, so we had to go to the spa and relax with massages and aromatherapy. Next weekend we are planning make a trip to the Caribbean coast to wear our sexy costumes.

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I went shopping with my two best friends

the Last weekend we were at the mall looking at the most beautiful dresses of all and the sexiest swimwear to wear on the next vacation.
My friends and I bought enough shoes for the rest of the year, hehehe.
At the end of the afternoon we were exhausted from shopping, so we had to go to the spa and relax with massages and aromatherapy.
Next weekend we are planning to make a trip to the Caribbean coast to wear our sexy swimsuits.

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I went shopping with my two best friends

This last weekend we were at the mall looking at the most beautiful dresses of all and the sexiest swimwear for them in the next vacation.
My friends and I bought enough shoes for the rest of the year, hehehe.
At the end of the afternoon we were so exhausted from the shopping that we had to go to the spa and relax with massages and aromatherapy.
Next weekend we are planning to make a trip to the Caribbean coast to wear our sexy costumes.

 

Good, clear paragraph.  Review your prepositions and use of compound sentences and relative pronouns.  

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You are very beautiful girl, I like Colombia, long time ago I visit Medellin, Cali, Barranquilla, Bogotá, Cundinmarca. Really Colombia it´s a Paradise. For example When I visited Cartagena the seasides and hotels are really amaizing, the people so kindly. The Carnivals are magnifics.Medellin is called : "The Eternally Spring" and the most beautiful girls of south america. Nice regards, Mario
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I went shopping with my two best friends

 

Last weekend we were at the mall looking at the most beautiful dresses and the sexiest swimwear to wear on our next vacation.


My friends and I bought enough shoes for the rest of the year.


By the end of the afternoon we were so exhausted from the shopping, that we had to go to the spa and relax with massages and aromatherapy.


Next weekend we are planning to make a trip to the Caribbean coast to wear our sexy costumes.

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