Some sentences

Please, I would like to know if next the following sentences are correct. Thanks!

-We have received [a] payment for item number 11111
-Soon we are shipping it with the next set of data [Without context, there can be many interpretations]
-Please give me provide us with a phone number to put in the sticker so that it can appear onof the package label.
-For purchasing, you should request to us the payment form from us.

Some sentences

Please, I would like to know if next sentences are correct. Thanks!
-We have received a payment for item number 11111
-Soon we are shipping it with next data
-Please give me a phone number to put in the sticker of the package.
-For purchasing, you should request to us the payment form.

Here is my suggestion:

*We have received payment for item number 11111

*We will proceed for delivery via shipping with next data

*Please provide me your phone number for packaging purpose

*Please request a payment form if you want to purchase an items.