我妹妹要成为一名护士

我总是感觉我的妹妹既有成为一名医生的素质，但是他从来不相信自己。

他从毕业中学后当护老者工作。虽然他爱这样的工作，不但在英国那个职业又不高的工资又不方便的功夫（working hours? schedule?).今年他终于决定想培养自己的能力就刚报名大学！九月去大学学如何成为一名护士。Whoop whoop!

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1，我总是感觉我的妹妹既有（拥有）成为一名医生的素质。

2，但是他（她）从来不相信自己。（他—he, 她—she）

3，他从毕业中学后当护老者工作。（她从中学毕业后，做老年护工的工作。）

4，虽然他（她）爱这样的工作，不但（不过）在英国那个职业又不高的工资（不高）（作息时间）又（也）不方便的功夫。（作息时间：it means working time and rest time. If you do a job, usually you will get a schedule of the work time. You will know when you should go to work and when you can have a rest. Most of people can work in day and have a rest at night. But as nurse, their schedule are different the most of people's. I think you want to say that--“作息时间”）

5，今年他（她）终于决定想培养自己的能力，就刚报名（向）大学（报了名）！

6，九月去大学学（习）如何成为一名护士。（“学习” is a phrase. it means "learn","study"."学"，it means "learn" "study", too. But it's just a word. How can use them, it depents. You will read many Chinese words and know it...）

btw: the picture is very funny. lol.

我妹妹要成为一名护士

我总是感觉（觉得/认为）我的妹妹既有成为一名医生的素质(潜质)，但是他（她）从来不相信自己。

他（她）从毕业中学后当护老者工作。（她从中学毕业后，就一直从事老年人护理工作。）虽然他（她）（喜）爱这样的工作（这份工作），不但在英国那个职业又不高的工资又不方便的功夫（working hours? schedule?).（但是在英国，从事这种职业，既不能获得不错的工资，又不能很好的安排作息时间。）今年他（她）终于决定想（要）培养自己的能力（，）就刚报名大学！（刚才去大学报了名）九月去大学学如何成为一名护士。Whoop whoop!

我妹妹要成为一名护士

我总是感觉我的妹妹既有成为一名医生的素质，但是他从来不相信自己。

[我一直认为我的妹妹具有成为一名医生的素质，但是她从来不相信自己。]

他从毕业中学后当护老者工作[自从中学毕业后她一直做老年看护工作]。虽然他爱这样的工作，不但在英国那个职业又不高的工资又不方便的功夫（working hours? schedule?)[但是在英国，这个职业既拿不到高工资，工作时间又很不自由 my translation here means it's hard for you to schedule your own matters according to the working hours . but it depends on what you wanted to say, 'the working hours is long', or 'you have to be ready to calls all the time'. ].今年他终于决定想培养[by “培养”, you mean "foster" or "develope"?]自己的能力就刚报名大学！[今年她终于决定.....，刚刚报名上大学！]九月去大学学如何成为一名护士。Whoop whoop!

writing your article in your own language following your practice can enable others make more accurate correction. because the translation you got from dictionary might mislead sometimes.

Tittle:我妹妹要成为一名护士 (You sister is going to be a nurse?)我的妹妹将要成为一名护士 The big thing is how to express correctly if you really want to learn Chinese. (The different is between “要”and “将要”“要”express on someone’s own initiative but don’t know if he will do that. For example I want to be good but I don’t know if I can be. but”将要” is more correct. It’s a word which can be expressed further. And according to your writing she is planning and doing, so being a nurse is just a matter of time. I think”将要” is more suitable.

我总是感觉我的妹妹既有成为一名医生的素质，但是他从来不相信自己。 (I do believe my sister has some basic qualities as a doctor or nurse<this word is unclear, you mentioned nurse but here is doctor> but she never believe herself?< Big question she do not believe herself with anything or be a doctor ?) 我相信我的妹妹具备一切可以成为一名现代医生的基本素质，但问题是她从来不相信她可以做到。(我相信 is more suitable than 我总是感觉. It gives more trust with your sister and also express your sister has that quality. “既有” in this sentence has a big question. It is misleading. Although it means got but It’s also a word about conjunction. So”具备” is more correct.^ ^ This sentence has a big question is it’s she not he right? So in Chinese is”她” not “他” do you see if they different? Bingo ^ ^ is radicals. “女” means girl. Although used less in the ancient China which was the traditional ethics that men are superior to women. But now you can use”她” to represent women. ^ ^ I am not going to explain how to create “他” (cause Chinese hieroglyphs is long story^ ^)

他从毕业中学后当护老者工作。虽然他爱这样的工作，不但在英国那个职业又不高的工资又不方便的功夫（working hours? schedule?).Wow, I have no doubt this sentence is difficult for me, my brain cells have run out for trying to understand what you mean. Just kidding. (She is taking care of the old all the time after graduating from middle school. Although she loves this job, the fact is this work goes with a low salary and no schedule? Or working hours? in British. )她自从中学毕业后就一直从事护老者的工作。尽管她很热爱她现在从事的这份工作，但是这份职业在英国既不能获取良好的报酬，又不能拥有合理的弹性工时制。(他从毕业中学后当护老者工作。This sentence has a little problem with word order when you translated in Chinese. 尽管她很热爱她现在从事的这份工作，但是这份职业在英国既不能获取良好的报酬，又不能拥有合理的弹性工时制。This sentence I used two link words “尽管……但是” “既不能……又不能”, the first one express one thing is… but another side is… the second express something is not…another things is not…neither. And the same time I used some words which are more suitable for written expression^ ^ but you need pay attention to word order. ^ ^

今年他终于决定想培养自己的能力就刚报名大学！九月去大学学如何成为一名护士。Whoop whoop! (This year she finally decided to cultivate her ability to be a nurse. so she just enrolled in a course and will learn how to be a excellent nurse in September. Whoop Whoop^ ^!)今年她终于下定决心去培养作为一名护士的能力，并且已经报名了大学里的护士课程。九月份她将会去大学学习如何成为一名优秀的护士人员。（Also have some problem with word order when you translated English into Chinese, but it’s fine I can know what you want to express. But if you want to know how to express correct just practice ^ ^）

After revising：我的妹妹将要成为一名护士

我相信我的妹妹具备一切可以成为一名现代医生的基本素质，但问题是她从来不相信她可以做到。 她自从中学毕业后就一直从事护老者的工作。尽管她很热爱她现在从事的这份工作，但是这份职业在英国既不能获取良好的报酬，又不能拥有合理的弹性工时制。今年她终于下定决心去培养作为一名护士的能力，并且已经报名了大学里的护士课程。九月份她将会去大学学习如何成为一名优秀的护士人员。

PS：You also give some advices to someone who wrote an essay in English, That's why I do same thing now.BTW, if a nurse is becoming in the pic I wish I will never go to hosptial^ ^.