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You can comprehensive advices which are put forward by Leslie Jack and Jeff^ ^But according to your English meaning, I tried to write by Chinese. The different thing is expressing, English is straighter than Chinese.
英文: English:
Advertisements (谎言)
Everywhere
I hear their sounds 谎言遍布周遭
I see their faces
They sell values
They sell concepts
They sell images
如花如梦如幻 如烟如雾如尘 (This sentence from Vajracchedika which means the lie is trying to package and sell himself in the world to attract people and also suggest advertisement is illusory)
of success
of love
of beauty
They sell the idea of what is normal
advertisements tell us what we are
And who we should be
When we fail
We are ashamed
We are guilty 孤烟庭院寒树 伊人为谁红妆?日暮大漠归雁 君子望尽天涯(this point out who wanna Advertisements? Most of women and men, they wanna be beautiful younger and charming........
And we will fail
Failure is inevitable
We reach
For the impossible
We want to be a person that does not exist
she does not exist, he does not exist
advertisements sell a lie
a lie I will not buy 何人为之?( who need lie? A rhetorical question seems more objective and give people unlimited imagination)
谎言
谎言遍布周遭
如花如梦如幻
孤烟庭院寒树
伊人为谁红妆?(First sence)
谎言遍布周遭
如烟如雾如尘
日暮大漠归雁
君子望尽天涯 (Second sence)
谎言遍布周遭
何人为之? (Third sence)
I'm not a poet, but I hope this can help you.
广告
遍地都是
我听着他们的声音
我看着他们的脸颊
他们出售价值
他们出售概念
他们出售图像
关于成功
关于爱情
关于美丽
他们试图告诉你什么才是正确的想法
广告告诉我们
我们是什么
我们应该是什么
当我们失败时
我们惭愧
我们内疚
但是我们终将会失败
因为失败不可避免
We reach
For the impossible(I don't know how to translate orz)
我们想成为并不可能存在的人
她不存在,他也不存在
广告其实在出售谎言
一个我不会购买的谎言
By the way, April, Why do you want to write a poem about advertise?
What a lovely poem! My Chinese version :) I have made some changes due to line length requirement and to sound more like Chinese than an English version translation. The meaning remains the same. Your poem is so bitingly the truth.
Advertisements
Everywhere 四处四方 or 广告四处
I hear their sounds 其音我听
I see their faces 其顏我見
They sell values 價值可賣
They sell concepts 构想都賣
They sell images 景意全賣
of success 是否成功 is it not for success
of love 是否恋情
of beauty 是否美丽
They sell the idea of what is normal 賣得是正 what can be sold is the real stuff (normal)
advertisements tell us what we are 它告於我们
And who we should be 咱们是誰人
When we fail 当成敗时 here 成 means "become" not success
We are ashamed 慚愧自到 shame automatically comes,
We are guilty 歉疚直來 guilt rushes straight through
And we will fail 成敗臨头 failing and looming
Failure is inevitable 失敗未免 failure is inevitable
We reach 天上微星 literally: tiny stars in heaven
For the impossible 絕望都摘 though impossible, still we want to pluck
We want to be a person that does not exist 欲成那夢裡人 to be the person in the dream
she does not exist, he does not exist 她他全非無存
advertisements sell a lie 广告只賣謊語
a lie I will not buy 這謊語我不買.
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