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Pick a gift for my niece I'am off today,and the Spring Festival is coming,I will go home 8 days later,so I decided to pick a gift for my niece.I haven't seen my niece about half a year,and i miss her so much. At first time,i thought it was a easy job,but after I got off from the subway and saw the crowds in the shoping mall,i felt i would be diffcult,after hang out one hour,I found it was really a diffcult job.There are so much choices,like barbie doll,nice dress,and so on. At last I bought a skirt,and decide to buy her favorite snacks when I arrived home,and i hope she will like her aunt's gift.

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Pick a gift for my niece

I'am off today,and the Spring Festival is coming,I will go home in 8 days time later,so I decided to pick a gift for my niece.I haven't seen my niece for about half a year,and i miss her so much.
At first time,i thought it was a easy job,but after I got off from the subway and saw the crowds in the shoping mall,i felt it would be diffcult,after hang out one hour,I found it was really a diffcult job.There are so much many choices,like barbie dolls,nice dresses,and so on. At last In the end I bought a skirt,and decided to buy her her favorite snacks when I arrived home,and i hope she will like her aunt's gift.

 

 

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Pick a gift for my niece

I'am off today,and. the The Spring Festival is coming, and I will go home in 8 days later.,so So I decided to pick a gift for my niece .I haven't seen my niece for about half a year,and i miss her so much.
At first timethe beginning,i thought it was a easy job., but But after I got off from the subway and saw the crowds in the shoping mall, and i felt i would be diffcult,after hang out one hour,I found it was really a diffcult job.There are so much  many choices, like barbie dolls,nice dresses,and so on. At last I bought a skirt,and also decided to buy her favorite snacks when I arrived home. ,and I hope she will like my gift.

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