Funny! :)

This are my goals for 2014

This are my goals for 2014: 

* Don't train at the Gym
* Don't will lose weight
* Dont' stop drinking
* Don't will make my best for avoid mistakes
* Don't will learn a new skill
* Don't will grow

This year I will see if it's possible be a happy woman while fat, drunked, child-like, and unskilled. 

When you are with the people that makes you to be who you are, this people will build your best memories.  (Not sure what you are trying to say here, perhaps: "When you are with people who make you feel good, you create the best memories.)

This These are my goals for 2014:

This These are my goals for 2014:

* Don't will do trainning in a Ggym
* Don't will lose weight
* Don't will leave stop drinking
* Don't will make my best for avoid mistakes
* Don't will learn a new skill
* Don't will grow

This year, I will see if it's possible to be a happy woman being who is fat, drunked, and child-like, and without as well as lacking in great skills. (see comment below)

When you are with the people that makes you to be who you are, this these people will build your best memories.

For the yellow highlighted portion: When you have a list in a sentence, all the items in the list must be in the same part of speech (noun, verb, adjective, etc). This is called "parallelism." For example, I changed the sentence to "fat, drunk, and child-like." These are all adjectives. I couldn't figure out a way to say "without great skills" as an adjective ("unskillful" didn't seem to be accurate), so I re-worded that part of the sentence to separate it from the list.

Overall, great job! Your spelling is quite good :) Based on your comment from the previous correction, I posted this correction as though you don't want to accomplish the things on the list! The syntax for such a sentence would be "Don't + verb." This verb would be in the infinitive form (to run, to swim, to go, etc.) but without the "to." It's also already implied that you're speaking about the future, so you do not need to add "will." Hope this helps! Let me know if you have any questions~

These are my goals for 2014

These are my goals for 2014

* I will train in a Gym
* I will lose weight
* I will stop drinking
* I will do my best to avoid mistakes
* I will learn a new skill
* I will grow

This year I will see if it's possible be a happy woman being fat, drunken, child-like, and without great skills.

When you are with the people that makes you to be who you are, this people will build your best memories.

*I love the last sentence! It's really good :) and your intentions are very admirable - I hope they're going well. Don't is a contraction of 'Do not' so it doesn't really apply in the instances you were using it, but otherwise this is great and your spelling is better than mine! I'm jealous :) The only other thing is 'training' only has one 'n'.

Take care and best of luck with your intentions - they're almost exactly mine too! I'm also trying to be more frivolous.