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Look up new challenges... After I ran a triathol last year, I need to look up new challenges for this year. I loved to mix three different sports into the same race: swimming, cycling, and running. This triathol was on September in Madrid. We swam into Casa de Campo's lake. Casa de Campo is a huge park in Madrid. There is a big lake and a lot of roads without traffic there. It's a wonderful place to practice sport. For this year I want to run two new triathlons. I hope I can to work out hard during three or four months, to be ready when the season starts.

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Look up new challenges...

After running a triathlon last year, I need to look up new challenges for this year.
I loved mixing three different sports into the same race: swimming, cycling, and running.
This triathlon was in September in Madrid. We swam in Casa de Campo's lake. Casa de Campo is a huge park in Madrid. There is a big lake and a lot of roads without traffic there. It's a wonderful place to practice sport.
For this year I want to run two new triathlons. I hope I can to work out hard during the next three or four months, to be ready when the season starts.

 

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