Shalom (it's 2014 !!! :-))

Shalom

Shame Daniera, - shemi Daniera

Naim meod.
Mashlom ha ?  - Ma Shelomcha?
Ani medeberet rak kitsat.  - ani medaberet ketzat iverit
Toohal lezoor lee leelmod ivrit ?  - toohal la'azor lee leelmod ivrit?

Toda Rabah.

L'hitriot (not sure if that is how you spell it) - Lehitraot 


Thanks in advance for any corrections. Hopefully in time I will write in block/script)

Daniera xXx

Shalom (it's 2014 !!! :-))

Shalom

Shame shmi Daniera,

Naim meod.
Mashlom ha ? "ma shlomha?" is the masculine-singular form, you should use "ma shlomhem?"
Ani medeberet rak kitsat. ktsat
Toohal lezoor lee leelmod ivrit ? tohlu (<--again, you should use plural form); laazor

Toda Rabah.

L'hitriot (not sure if that is how you spell it) lehitraot

Thanks in advance for any corrections. Hopefully in time I will write in block/script)

Daniera xXx