Diary1

04/01/2014
Today the is sun shinning is shining day and it is a good time to go outside to and do some have activities. But i was have been stuck in preparing my IELTS which is a necessarily certificate for applying to school.

Most of the day i have spent on preparing for the oral test which is the worse part of area in my test. I know it is hard to improve in a month but i will try my best to upgrade it. There is has a well -know words  expression:”Nothing is impossible.“ And i am glad that I have received a lot of help from here. Those These people are so nice to answer my questions in detail.

By the way i have acquired a lot of new knowledge when i was fulfilling in my answers, such as how to be polite and how to manage your my time better.

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This was a good peice! There were some mistakes, most of them were to do with tense.
It might help to try to think, is this happening now, has it already happened or is it going to happen.
This is important because some words change depending on when the action happens.

Diary1

04/01/2014
Today is sun shinning day and it is good time to go outside to have activities. However, i was stuck in preparing IELTS, which is a necessarily certificate for applying school.

Most of the day I spent on preparing the oral test, which is the worse area in my test. I know it is hard to improve in a month, but i will try my best to upgrade it. There has a well -know words:”Nothing is impossible.“ And I am glad to have received a lot of help from here. Those people are so nice to answer my questions in detail.

By the way, I have acquired a lot of new knowledge when I was reading their answers, such as how to be polite and how to manage your time better.

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[Good work.  Best of luck on your test.]