The First Day Of A New Year

Today is the first day of a new year. In China, today is a festival named "yuandan" and everyone has one day off. It's at the same time both a special but also and a normal day. I spent the whole day with my parents. I feel feeling pretty happy, because I haven't seen them for several months. Recently, there's been a saying very popular saying online: "the people who celebrate the new year with you this year will be with you forever, because from 2013 to 2014 (that is , "1314") has a similar pronunciation with as Chinese "一生一世" (forever). The only thing not perfect about today is was that I didn't go to see my grandma although I miss her so much. But However I think I'll go to see her as soon as possible, maybe on Saturday. And Finally, I hope it will be a nice year.

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The First Day Of A New Year

Today is the first day of a new year.In China,today is a festival named "yuandan" and everyone has one day off.It's a special but also normal day.I spent the whole day with my parents.I feel pretty happy,because I haven't seen them for several months.Recently,there's a saying that is very popular online.The people who celebrate the new year with you this year will be with you forever.Because from 2013 to 2014,that is "1314", has a similar pronunciation with Chinese "一生一世"(forever).The only thing not perfect today is I didn't go to see my grandma although I miss her so much.But I think I'll go to see her as soon as possible,maybe on Saturday.And finally,I hope it will be a nice year.

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