Bad Day

So many terrible things came to me and my friend Max and me. Tonight, I and Max and I would have wanted to prepare for tomorrow's examination, but we found all of the classrooms were closed. Because today is the New Year's Day,and everyone had taken time off, of course, including the managers of the classroom. Thus, we had to find another place where we can learn in there, but couldn't find one. Then, we thought we had to go back to the dormitory before we took away money from the ATM. However, the worst thing happened to my friend - her money was "stolen "by the ATM. What a terrible day! For these reasons, we are unhappy now,and I need to sleep.

[Good job.  When you mention yourself and other people in a sentence, you always refer to yourself last.]