My hometown is Wuhan, which located in the middle center of China, with Wuhan has a large wide river running across through it. The metropolise city is renowned for it's time-honored history, spectacular natural wonders, local delicious delicacies, and so on.
     As it's a ideal place for travelling touring, I'm keen on inviting you to visit, it and I would be honored to be your tourist guide. However, If you are merely into shopping, you might have a hard time, because people in the shopping malls there are packed like sardines all the time.
     The scene in the picture the scene is of the cherry tree flower blossoms in on the Wuhan University campus. which is The cherry trees usually blossom in early April.

My Hometown

My hometown is called Wuhan and it lies in the middle of China with a large river running through it.The metropolis is renowned for its time-honored history, spectacular natural wonders, local delicacies and many other things. As it's an ideal place for travelling I would like to invite you to come visit and I would be honored to show you around. However, if you are merely into shopping you might not have a good time because the shopping malls are always full of people, you'll feel like a sardine in a can.

In the picture below you can see the cherry tree blossom in front of the Wuhan University which is usually in early April.

My Hometown

My hometown is Wuhan which is locates located in the middle of China with a large river running across through it. The metropolise is renowned for its time-honored history, spectacular natural wonders, local delicious delicacies 1 * and so on. As it's a ideal place for travelling, I'm keen on 2* inviting you to visit it and I would be honored to be your tourist guide. However, if
you are merely into shopping, you might have a hard time, cause people in the shopping malls there are packed like sardines all the time.

In the picture, the scene is cherry flower blossom in Wuhan University,which is usually in early April.

1* or delicious food

2* I would prefer 'I would like to' or 'I'd be delighted to' to 'keen on' here. For me 'Keen on' is used for hobbies or interests. To me it sounds very colloquial here. Possibly another American/European difference.