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New year is coming ...! Good morning, everyone :-) Today is a last day of 2013...How have you been your winter holidays? I have backed to my parents house and spent a picefull days with my family. My 2013 year stared with too much ndrinking and vomiting at friends room. I didn't think it was a good start. So I decide that the starts of 2014 year, I won't drink :-) I had a lot of trouble, sadness, and hardship in 2013. I think all of them came from my wrong actions.I didn't think I cried such a lot. However, i had a lots of joyfull, pleasure ,love, and happiness too. I was not good at express my feelings to another... Now,I can do that, and willing to do! My life in the UK finished...and my university in japan has started. There were many changes, and it's hard to adapt for me. Now, I have got new aim and archived few things! I hape everyone's 2014 will be fantastic year!

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New year is coming ...!

Good morning, everyone :-)

Today is a the last day of 2013...How have your winter holidays been your ?

I have went backed to my parents house and spent a picefull days with my family.

My 2013 year started with too much drinking and vomiting in at a friend's room. I didn't think it was a good start. So I decided that for the start of the 2014 year (or just 2014), I won't drink :-)

I had a lot of trouble, sadness, and hardship in 2013.
I think all of them came from my wrong actions. I didn't think I cried such a lot ("I don't think I've ever cried so much" might be better).

However, I had lots of joyful, pleasure ,love, and happiness too. I was not good at expressing my feelings to another... Now,I can do that, and I'm willing to do!

My life in the UK ended finished...and my university in japan has started. There were many changes, and it's hard for me to adapt.

Now, I have got a new aim and achieved a few things already!
I hope everyone's 2014 will be a fantastic year!

 

Good for you! :)

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New year is coming ...!

Good morning, everyone :-)

Today is a last day of 2013...How have you been on your winter holidays?

I have gone back to my parents house and spent some peaceful days with my family.

My 2013 year stared with too much drinking and vomiting at a friends room. I didn't think it was a good start. So I decide that at the start of 2014 year, I won't drink :-)

I had a lot of trouble, sadness, and hardship in 2013.
I think all of them came from my wrong actions. I didn't think I cried so much.

However, I had a lots of joy, pleasure ,love, and happiness too. I was not good at expressing my feelings to another... Now, I can do that, and I'm willing to do it!

My life in the UK finished...and my university in Japan has started. There were many changes, and it's hard for me to adapt for me.

Now, I have got new aim and archived a few things!
I hope everyone's 2014 will be fantastic year!

 

[Good luck back in Japan]

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