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A Dreadful Winter Night Yesterday I was awakened by the cold in the midnight. My toes were frozen. A light wind was blowing into my room. It seems I forgot to close the window before I went to bed. It took me a great deal of courage to get out of bed to close it. But I was still cold. I needed to warn myself up somehow. At first I wanted to turn on the air-condition, but I couldn't find the remote control. Then I wanted to get another quilt, but it's in the top of the closet. Damn it! Could it be more miserable? At last I found a glass bottle, filled it with hot water. Then I snuggled down with it and was quickly asleep.

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A Dreadful Winter Night.

Yesterday I was awakened by the cold in theat midnight/in the middle of the night. My toes were frozen. A light wind was blowing into my room. It seems I forgot to close the window before I went to bed. It took me a great deal of courage to get out of bed to close it.
But I was still cold. I needed to warm myself up somehow. At first I wanted to turn on the air-conditioner/(the heater), but I couldn't find the remote control. Then I wanted to get another quilt, but it was on the top of the closet. Damn it! Could it my night have been more miserable?
At last, I found a glass bottle, filled it with hot water, Then (I) snuggled down with it and shortly after, I was quickly fast asleep.

 

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Great job. Don't forget to close your windows tonight. :)

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A Dreadful Winter Night [Period not needed in a title.]

 

Yesterday I was awakened by the cold in the at midnight. My toes were literally frozen. A light breeze wind was blowing into my room. It seemed that I had forgotten to close the window before I went going to bed. It took me a great deal of courage effort for me to get out of bed to and close it.
But Still I was still cold. I needed to warm myself up somehow. At first I wanted to turn on the heater air-conditioning, but I couldn't find the remote control. Then I wanted to get another quilt, but it's was on the top of the closet. Damn it! Could Can it be more miserable?


At last I found a glass bottle, and I filled it with hot water. Then I snuggled down snuggling with it and its warmth; was very quickly I fell asleep.

 

Sounds like a cartoon episode of the old.

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