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A great trip. In Colombia there are many pretty villages to visit and get relax. Last month I went to Tocaima with my mom, it's a warm place located in Cundinamarca, it's to three hours from my city. First we stopped to eat "pandeyucas" something like a special kind of bread, we drank natural orange juice too. When we arrived to the watering place, we had breakfast and then, Andrés, the tour guide invited everybody to take an ecological walking near to a brook, after that we have a mud therapy it was very nice and healthy, we washed the mud in a small lake then we took a bath in thermal waters. I like photography so I took some ones. It is one of them.

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A great trip.

In Colombia there are many pretty villages to visit and get relaxed**. Last month I went to Tocaima with my mom, it's a warm place located in Cundinamarca, it's to three hours from my city. First we stopped to eat "pandeyucas" something like a special kind of bread, we drank natural orange juice too. When we arrived to at the watering place(??), we had breakfast and then, Andrés, the tour guide invited everybody to take an ecological walking near to a brook, after that we have had a mud therapy and it was very nice and healthy, we washed the mud in a small lake then we took a bath in thermal waters.
I like photography so I took some pictures ones. It This is one of them.

 

** OR ... to visit where you can (just) relax

** OR (spoken) ... villages to visit and relax in.

** (spoken (American English)) = fresh orange juice

** bar? restaurant? cafe?

(This is a very complex paragraph with difficult sentences.  I understood it all (except "watering place"). You must be an advanced student. Great job.)

 

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A Great Trip.

In Colombia, we have (there are) many pretty villages where you can (to visit and get) relax/unwind.  Last month, my mother and I spent three hours travelling to (I went to) Tocaima, (with my mom, it's) a warm place located in Cundinamarca. (, it's to three hours from my city.) On the way, we first (we) stopped to eat "pandeyucas",  something like a special kind of bread, and (we) drank natural orange juice. (too.) When we arrived at (to) the watering place, we had breakfast and then, Andrés, the tour guide, invited everyone(body) to join in a nature trail, following the path close  (take an ecological walking near) to a brook. (,) After that, we enjoyed some mud bath (have a mud) therapy,  which (it) was very nice and healthy. (,) Lastly, we washed the mud off in a small lake then (we) took a bath in thermal waters.
I like photography so I took some pictures. (ones.) This (It) is one of them.

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Nice story Amalia sounds like a great place. It sounds a bit like here, we have mud baths and thermal spas.
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You are invited when you want!!! Thanks for reading my text
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Great trip, place and photo! I'd like to visit there one day.

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