I am on holiday!

After a tiring year in at school, I am on holiday. I will not travel to anywhere this year, so I will have to find interesting things to do at home.
I have some plans. I want to improve my English in a relaxing way: watching videos in English, listening to music, reading good books, etc. I will spend a lot of time drawing and I will try to join in take up a different sport.
I will also read some books for entertainment, what I mean is: books that aren't related to a school home schoolwork. Yesterday I began to reading a book called The Book of Embraces, written by Eduardo Galeano. I like it.
I want to pass use my holiday as better well as possible, I'm trying to avoid feeling boring, because many teenagers feel bored when they get on holiday and spend most of their time surfing the internet randomly or sleeping. I am not like them hehehe.

I am on holiday!

After a tiring year in school, I am on holiday. I will not travel to anywhere this year, so I will have to find interesting things to do at home.
I have some plans. I want to improve my English in a relaxing way: watching videos in English, listening to music, reading good books, etc. I will spend a lot of time drawing and I will try to join in a different sport.
I will also read some books for entertainment, what I mean is: books that aren't related to a school homework. Yesterday I began to read a book called "The Book of Embraces," written by Eduardo Galeano. I like it.
I want to pass my holiday as better best as possible, I'm trying to avoid feeling bored, because many teenages feel bored when they get on holiday and spend most time surfing the internet randomly or sleeping. I am not like them hehehe.

Great job Gabriela!! Very few minor mistakes. Your English is excellent!

I am on going for a holiday!

After a tiring year in school, I am going to get myself a on holiday. However, I will not be travelling to anywhere this year, so I will have to find interesting things to do at home.

I have some plans. I want to improve my English in a relaxing way: watching, videos in English, listening to music, reading good books, etc. I will spend a lot of much time in drawing and I will shall try to join in take up a different sport.

I will shall also be reading some books for entertainment, leisure.  By this, what I mean is: books that aren't reading on things not related to a school homework. Yesterday I began started to read a book called "The Book of Embraces", written by Eduardo Galeano. I like it.

I want to pass spend my holidays as best as I can.  better as possible, I'm trying don't want to avoid feeling boring, because bored like many other teenagers.  When they feel bored when they get on during their holidays,  and spend most they will waste all their time surfing the internet randomly or in sleeping. I am not like them! hehehe.

Not bad at all.  I am just showing you a better and more natural way to write.  You already have a good correction.