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children Write about the following topic: Because o f the busy pace o f modern life, many children spend most o f their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world. How important is it for children to learn to understand and appreciate nature? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. it is known that important is it for children to learnto understand and appreciate nature plays a big role in human life. The number of people who give importance to this subject has risen up in recent years. Many children spend most of their time indoors and have little expose to the natural world. There are several reasons of this, some of which is about busy pace of modern life. Children spend most of this time on the street from former, so they were learning things that are bad and good in environment. That is, they were intertwinend with the environment. They know better animals and plants. However, this case changed completely w,th growing technology and increasing population. On of most important reasons of this change is growing techology. İt has allowed a lot of business and shopping center, so the area of children reduced. Parents began to spend most of their time here. They began to spend too little with children. Namely, children were trapped between the busy pace and growing population. They began to spend at home with competer games istead to play in the park . This case has made them asocial. They has break ties with friend. Moreover, they has ill quicly because they are growing sansitive. To sum up taking all the explanations which are given above into consideration it can be concluded that I reserve more time and living space.

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Write about the following topic:
Because o f the busy pace o f modern life, many children spend most o f their time
indoors and have little exposure to the natural world.
How important is it for children to learn to understand and appreciate nature? Give
reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge
or experience.

It is known that it is important for children to learn to understand and appreciate nature. This plays an important role in human life. The number of people who consider this subject important has risen in recent years. Many children spend most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world. There are several reasons for this, one of which is the busy pace of modern life.
Children used to spend most of their time on the street, so they were learning things that are both bad and good from the environment. That is, their lives were intertwinend with the environment. They knew more about animals and plants. However, this changed completely as technology grew and population increased.
One of most significant reasons for this change is growing techology. İt has allowed a lot of businesses and shopping centers to grow, so the playing area of children has been reduced. Parents began to spend most of their time here. They began to spend too little time with children. Namely, children were trapped between the busy pace of life and growing population. They began to spend time at home with competer games instead of playing in the park . This has made them asocial. They have broken ties with friends. Moreover, they grow ill quickly because they are growing too sensitive.
To summarize, taking all the explanations which are given above into consideration, it can be concluded that we should reserve more time and living space for our children.

 

[editor's note: Your English is fairly strong! Keep up the good work. I'm looking for partners with whom I can practice French, send me a message, I think we can help each other! -Braylon]

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