The new chance.

A new chance is coming to me again. I feel so happy and also nervous. The last times, the I had such a chance came to me, but I could not take advantage can't got all of it. I let many chances pass me by gone away. At that such times I feel disappointed about with myself. My family, my friends encourage me so much, they talk tell me that you never give up, you have to continue. And in this chance This time I talk with told myself that I have to do my best. I was afraid to face with my family and with my friends if this bad thing happens - I don't want to think anymore. I'm very anxious.

The new chance.

A new chance is coming to me again. I feel so happy and but also nervous. The last times, the chance came to me, but I missed it can't got all of it. I let many chances gone go away (also, you can say: "I let many chances slip by). At that the time I feel disappointed about myself. My family, and my friends encouraged me so much, and they talk tell me that you never give up, you have to continue. And in with this chance, I talk with tell myself that I have to do my best. I am afraid to face with my family, with and my friend if the something bad thing happens. i don't want to think about it anymore. I'm very anxious.

Your english is very good!

One thing to watch out for is run-on sentences (sentences with lots of commas) - for example: She went to the store, and saw her friend, who wanted to buy oranges, but didn't have enough money, so she was sad. You need to split the sentence up so there aren't as many commas. Use words to link ideas, or break the sentence up into smaller ones. You could say this sentence better like this: She went to the store where she saw her friend. Her friend wanted to buy oranges, but didn't have enough money and so she was sad.

Good luck with your chance! :)