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Fire in Valparaíso Today, I have heard three times the sound of the fire trucks in Valparaiso and twice I saw the smog. The first time, the fire fighters had to extinguish the fire of seven houses. It was sad, about twenty eight families lost everything. In Chile, the fire fighters do not earn some money. Their jobs is voluntary. I think the government would pay them. A lot of public figures earn up to one hundred the Chilean minimal wage. If the those political people decrease their wages, my country will fastly forward. I know that it is not the only way. I expect someday the fire fighters earn money. My parent drives a ambulance rescue in a hospital and obtain money. All people that save lives must be recognized.

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Fire in Valparaíso

Today, I have heard fire trucks three times the sound of the fire trucks in Valparaiso today. and twice I saw the smog. smoke in the sky twice. The first time, the fire fighters firemen had to extinguish extinguished the fire of seven houses house fires. It was sad because about twenty eight families lost everything they owned. 

In Chile, the fire fighters do are not professionals. earn some money. Their jobs is voluntary. Our fire department is voluntary. 

I think the our government would pay them. should fund a professional fire department. A lot of Many public figures officials earn up to one hundred times the Chilean minimal wage. If the those political people politicians decrease their own wages, my country will fastly forward. may move forward I know that it is not the only way. in public safety and in other important public services.

I expect someday that one day the our fire fighters will earn money. My parent drives a rescue ambulance rescue in for a hospital and obtain money is paid a salary.  All people that save lives lifesavers must be recognized.

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Fire in Valparaíso

Today, I have heard three times the sound of the fire trucks in Valparaiso and twice I saw the smoke. The first time, the fire fighters had to extinguish the fire of seven houses. It was sad. About twenty eight families lost everything.

In Chile, the fire fighters do not earn much money. Their jobs are voluntary. I think the government should pay them. A lot of public figures earn up to one hundred times the Chilean minimal wage. If the those political people decrease their wages, my country will move forward quickly. I know that it is not the only way.

I expect someday the fire fighters will earn money. My parent drives a rescue ambulance in a hospital and earns money. All people that save lives must be recognized.

 

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Fire in Valparaíso

Three times today I heard the sound of fire trucks in Valparaiso and I saw the smoke twice. The first time, the fire fighters had to extinguish the fire of seven houses. It was sad, about twenty eight families lost everything.

In Chile, the fire fighters do not earn any money. Their jobs are voluntary. I think the government Should pay them. A lot of public figures earn up to one hundred times the Chilean minimum wage. If those politicians decrease their wages, my country will progress quickly. I know that it is not the only way.

I expect that someday fire fighters will earn money. My parent drives an rescue ambulance for the hospital and obtains money. I believe that all people that save lives must be recognized.

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