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my self introduction in Mandarin 你好!我叫尤瑟夫。我是摩洛哥人。我的阿拉伯语名字是Youssef。我学汉语。我的中文不是很好。我22岁。我说阿拉阿伯语,法语和英语。 认识你很高兴! the record: http://vocaroo.com/i/s06KwzkdTYkj 谢谢for everyone correct me

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my self introduction in Mandarin

你好!我叫尤瑟夫。我是摩洛哥人。我的阿拉伯语名字是Youssef。我学汉语。我的中文不是很好。我22岁。我说阿拉阿伯语,法语和英语。
认识你很高兴!
السلام عليكم يا يوسف كيف حالكم؟

你好!(你们好!)我叫尤瑟夫,我是摩洛哥人,我的阿拉伯语名字是Youssef,我在学汉语,我的中文不是很好,我(今年)22岁,我会说阿拉阿伯语,法语和英语。
认识你很高兴!

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my self introduction in Mandarin 中文版自我介绍

语法没有错误。

发音建议:

1. the fourth tone: fully stress every syllable in the fourth tone; don't let it go upward even if the sentence isn't finished or you're thinking about what comes next. 

2. distinction between ng & n: needs more practice.

3. r and z needs to be taken care of.

4. ao:the ao in first 好 is better than in 叫.

i adore your pronunciation of 我, 洛, sh, and b. not in the sense that you're a foreigner. ; ) 

题外话:你20岁,还是22岁呀?(录音说20呢。)

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你好!我叫尤瑟夫。我是摩洛哥人。我的阿拉伯语名字是Youssef。我学汉语。我的中文不是很好。我22岁。我说阿拉阿伯语,法语和英语。
认识你很高兴!
the record: http://vocaroo.com/i/s06KwzkdTYkj
谢谢for everyone correct me

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my self introduction in Mandarin

你好!我叫尤瑟夫,我是摩洛哥人。我的阿拉伯语名字是Youssef,我在学汉语,我的中文不是很好。我22岁。我会说阿拉阿伯语,法语和英语。
认识你很高兴!
the record: http://vocaroo.com/i/s06KwzkdTYkj
谢谢for everyone correct me

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都没有看见语法的错误。不错!表扬一下。
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写的很好了

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