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Grandma

Everytime I went back to maternal mother’s home,I always went by my paternal mother’s home to get some fresh vegeterbals.My paternal mother always stood by the gate of her house,waiting for me with a big bag of vegeterbals.in her hands.When I got close to her,,she would put away the bag on my bicycle ,saying take care.It was just a little part of my life,but when she passed away 6 days ago,I’m becoming to realize that she will never plant vegetables ,will never wait for me, will never say take care.She paid attention to tiny things,always thought more of others than herself.I missed her so much but It’s too late to say such things.Anyway,we must treasure people around us.

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Grandma

Everytime  that I went back  to my maternal grandmother’s home, I always went by my paternal grandmother’s home to get some fresh vegeterbals vegetables. My paternal grandmother always stood by the gate of her house, waiting for me with a big bag of vegeterbals.  vegetables in her hands. When I got close to her,  she would put away the bag on my bicycle  while saying take care. It was just a little part of my life, but when  since she passed away 6 days ago,  I’m becoming I have started to realize that she will never plant vegetables, will never wait for me, will never say take care. She paid attention to tiny things, always thought more of others than herself. I miss ed her so much but It’s too late to say such things. Anyway,we must treasure people around us.

That is sad and part of your life has now gone. But in a small way, people will now remember your grandmother through your words.

I think that you write excellent English prose.

Grandma

Everytime Each time, [My preference.  If you want to know the difference, see http://www.differencebetween.net/language/difference-between-each-and-every/] I went back to my maternal mother’s home,_I always went drop by my paternal grandmother’s [your mother is your mother.  There is no such thing as a paternal or maternal one] home to get some fresh vegetables vegeterbals.__My Paternal grandmother always stand by the gate of her house,_waiting for me with a big bag of vegetables vegeterbals.in her hands.__When As I got close to passed by her,_she would put away the bag onto my bicycle , and saying, "Take care!" 

It was just a little small part of my life.  but when She passed away 6 six days ago.__I am just becoming to realize that she will never plant vegetables again nor, ,will never she wait for me, will never say and no longer saying, "Take care!".  She always paid attention to details tiny things,always and thought more of others than herself.__I missed her so much but It’s it too late to say such things anymore.__Anyway,we must 

Treasure people those around us before it is too late.

我之所以修改這篇文章是你寫得太有人情味!