My last vacation was awesome!!

Recently a friend of mine who i met in Canada came to visit me in Mexico. We had a very nice experience together. First I went to pick her up in Guadalajara, we stayed there for just 1 day and we came to my city lagos de Moreno. After that we went to Guanajuato, san Miguel de Allende, Querétaro and other beautiful towns and cities. We met lots of good friends and we had so much fun with them. As my friend is french, she could improve her spanish. So this was a very good experience for me and I hope can do it again.

Great entry, only three small mistakes :) In the last line you wrote "she could improve her Spanish". It is correct, but maybe it would be better to say "she was able to improve her Spanish". Nice picture, too. Looks like you two had a good time.

My last vacation was awesome!!

Recently a friend of mine who i met in Canada came to visit me in Mexico. We had a very nice time together. First I went to pick her up to Guadalajara, we stayed there just for  1 day and we came to my city lagos de Moreno. After that we went to Guanajuato, san Miguel de Allende, Querétaro and other beautiful towns and cities. We met lots of good friends and we had so much fun with them. As my friend is french, she could improve her spanish. So this was a very good experience for me and I hope I can do it again.