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Life Style of living
In China, there is a saying: Don't Stray far not from home when your parents are still alive. [And if you do, know where you are going] [父母在、不遠遊、遊必有方] there. But However, nowadays, more and more people prefer to going far away to get better jobs. development, This is especially so for those coming from the in countryside. They always think that there are is more opportunity in larger cities and earning more money can commanding better pay and to help them reduce their dependence from pressure of their family. To most large city people, they Many city dwellers/folks don't want are reluctant to leave their hometown and they like spending more time on staying would rather be with their parents. which style of living There is no is better don't have a specific answer to these two situations. As far as I am concerned, it is not so important to in choosing a particular life style, lifestyle. The choice for your reason you choose is more important vital. As for people in countryside the rural folks, the quality of life is may not so well as people in be as comfortable or convenient than those in the city, so they have everyone has to earn more money enough to guarantee the basics in life and to build a happiness family to for their family member. Comparing with that, living in city have a higher quality and feel better. This is understood, and you are repeating without adding value to the essay. So it is best to omit it. If you want a conclusion, write something more interesting such as a rhetoric question...
Have they ever consider also the high cost of living or higher crime in the city?
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