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today I want to write about my job. I spend a lot of time on the internet because I am working (or you could simply say "because I work in internet television") in internet television, my main function is to write articles and i have means to I can/I am able to work from home. if I have idea and it's good i can make reporting report on it. The last topic which i make I reported on/wrote about was about clay and i understanded understood a lot things on cley clay. it seems to me that people like that sight site. (Sight is vision, site is short for website.)
You did well. There were just a few word choices and grammar issues.
journal
Today I want to write about my job. I spend many a lot of time in on the internet because I work in internet television. My main job is write articles and i have the means to work from home. if I have an idea and it's good i can make a reporting. Last subject that I made was about cley and i understood a lot things on cley. It seems to me people like that sight/like to see that.
Generally, only computers or machines do "functions". Humans do "jobs".
What is "cley"?
Have a sunny day!
journal
today I want to write about my job. I spend a lot of/ much [many is for things that are countable] time on internet because of I am working on internet television, my main function is to write articles and [i have means to work from home]< (I didn't understand this part of your message) . if I have idea and if/wether it's good i can make reporting. last subject which i made was about cley and i understood lot things on cley. it seems to me people like that sight.
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