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When I go to Italki to say hello to my friends ... I love to make gifts greater than to receive them. When I go to Italki to say hello to my friends, I bring a small gift: picture, videos and more. Today I brought Carving. The word "Carving" means cutting (резьба) . Carving is on wood, stone, bone and ice. In cooking, carving used on vegetables, fruits, chocolate, cheese . In principle, the carving is possible for any cutting materials. Art of carving on fruits and vegetables originated in the East for thousands of years and has become part of national traditions. It requires a lot of skill! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RQXGTNUydIk

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When I go to Italki to say hello to my friends ...

I love to make gifts more than to receive them. (Another option: I love making... than receiving...)
When I go to Italki to say hello to my friends, I bring a small gift: picture, videos and more.
Today I brought Carving.
The word "Carving" means cutting (резьба) . Carving is on wood, stone, bone and ice.
In cooking, carving is used on (foods like) vegetables, fruits, chocolate, cheese .
In principle, the carving is possible for any cutting materials. (Another option: In reality, almost any material is suitable for carving.)
The Art of carving on fruits and vegetables originated in the East for thousands
of years ago and has become part of national traditions (of cultures around the world).
It requires a lot of skill!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RQXGTNUydIk

 

Mila, I loved your idea and your entry.  I used red for required revisions and grey for stylistic revisions.

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When I go to Italki to say hello to my friends... ...


I love to make gifts greater give than to receive them.


Whenever I go into Italki to say hello to my friends, I always bring a small gift: a picture, a videos and more or something.


Today I brought a carving. The word "Carving" means "an object or design cut from a hard material as an artistic work"cutting (резьба) . Thus Carving is on can be a piece of wood, stone, bone and even ice.


In cooking, carving We can carve used on vegetables, fruits, chocolate and cheese to beautiful our cooking. In principle, the carving is possible for any when the cutting tools are sharper than the materials to be carved.

 

The art of carving on fruits and vegetables originated in the East for thousands of years and has become part of national traditions.


It requires a lot of much skill and imagination!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RQXGTNUydIk

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When I go to Italki to say hello to my friends...

I love to  give than to receive.
Whenever I go into Italki to say hello to my friends, I always bring a small gift: a picture, a videos or something.
Today I brought a carving. "Carving" means "an object or design cut from a hard material as an artistic work (резьба) . Thus Carving  can be a piece of wood, stone, bone and even ice.
We can carve  on vegetables, fruits, chocolate and cheese to beautiful our cooking. In principle,  carving is possible when the cutting tools are sharper than the material to be carved.
The art of carving on fruits and vegetables originated in the East for thousands of years and has become part of national traditions.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RQXGTNUydIk

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Thanks for sharing.
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My video. CARVING http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I_k_sg_ESgI

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