A Smart Phones

You may laugh at me out of the date for being not in synch with the times.  in that Yes, I have no don't have a smart phone! It seems all people everyone around me owns/has one. Nevertheless, I insisted that having the simplest is was the best, because my dull non fancy phone have saves me much time for reading or for communicating purposes rather than to twiddle my time away playing something far more better than playing with a smart phone to do nothing but stupid and making me silly as well.

I don’t need a smart phone! also because of I have my Kindle! I am a bookworm and so to me, it means a lot more for me. [You can play with the structure and make your essay more interesting by writing, "A bookworm that I am... So it means a lot more to me."]  Even though I am single, Kindle is like much more than a satisfying boyfriend! to make me It is more delightful and a greater thriller. [you can use 'thriller' but here personification makes your essay becomes alive] Yes, now, The condition current situation is sort of complex.  I am worrying that worry that my attention I will be abstracted distractedseduced by the smart phone!  [this way is more vivid]. It is like a naïve girl was being attracted by to a cool looking playboy, then and breaking up with her dowdy but loyal boyfriend. You know how such stories end.  to please the new guy, as a result, her hasty doings leaded to a miserable life to her. [What you wrote is long winded.  Think how you would write in Chinese. You are a good writer!]

But I must take a smart phone, my friends always asked whether I had a chat application. [THis I really don't understand!  A phone is for talking already, why need an app to chat?  If it is for long distance calls, won't texting work?] Besides, it has been the smart phone time already, I must catch up with the time, to take advantage of some applications to make life more convenient. [I don't understand your first sentence.  The logic eludes me. So I am only guessing and how to conclude your essay better and yet not making you look like two faced] If I were to have a smart phone, I shall wait until my current phone conks out.  After all one has to go with the times.  Whether I am being dragged screaming and kicking into the situation or because of greater convenience, only time will tell for sure. 

A Smart Phone

You may laugh at me out of the date in that I have no smart phone even at this date. It seems all people everyone around me owns one.  Nevertheless I have insisted that the a simple phone was the best because my dull phone has saved me so much time for reading or something far more better than playing with a smart phone. to do nothing but makes me silly. (I'm not really sure what your trying to say with this last bit.)

Also, I don’t need a smart phone also because of my Kindle. I am bookworm, so it means a lot for to me.  Even though I am single, having a Kindle is like having a satisfying boyfriend to make me delighted. Yes, now, the condition is sort of complex. I worry that my attention will be abstracted taken by the smart phone. It is like a naïve girl that was attracted by a cool playboy then broke up with her loyal boyfriend to please the new guy. As a result, her hasty doings led to a miserable life to for her.

But I must take get a smart phone because my friends are always asking whether I have a chat application. Besides, it has been the is time to get a smart phone time already. I must catch up with the times to take advantage of some applications to that make life more convenient.