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Each has a one-off lifetime I used to dislike learning foreign languages,as I thought it is useless to spent time to learn a foreign language.I never thought of going abroad.In fact,I'm interested in biology and physics,I seldom take the time to learn English.Until I went to Hongkong,and met a man who have changed my mind.He is a coach driver,and can speak a fluent English.He told me many things which had opened my eyes,what impressed me most is:"If we're growing, we're always going to be out of our comfort zone." Indeed,You will never know how strong you are until one day you have no alternatives except for being strong.I want to struggle for a better future.Each has a one-off lifetime,I don't want to walk this life prosaically.Now,I have to admit I was short-sighted that time.The world is large,and the view is great! There are many places I want to go,and many things I want to do.Here,I want to tell myself,surely you won't waste this precious chance to lead your life in vain.

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Each has a one-off lifetime??? I don't understand nor make out from the context of the essay.  Can you write in Chinese?


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I used to dislike learning foreign languages,_as I thought it is useless to spend time to learning a foreign language one.__I have never thought of going abroad.__In fact,_I'm interested only in biology and physics.__I seldom take the time to learn English. This is, until I went to Hong_Kong,_and met a man who have changed my mind/outlook.__He is a No less than a coach driver,and who can could speak a bit of fluent English.__He told me [or "enlightened me on"] many things which had that made me opened my eyes.__What impressed me most was:

 

"If we're to growing, we're always going need to be out of our comfort zone."

 

Indeed! You will One never knows how strong you are one can be until one the day you have no alternatives except for to being strong.__I want have to struggle for in order to have a better future.__Each has a one-off lifetime,??? I don't want to walk this life prosaically.__Now,_I have to admit I was short-sighted beforethat time.__The world is large,_huge and the its views is are great! There are many places I want to go,_and many things I want to do.__Here,_I want to tell myself, this:_Surely you won't want to waste this precious chance to and lead/live your life in vain.

 

You have the markings of being a good writer!  However, you need to learn your punctuation spacing.  It is like dressing up for a job interivew.  Just as people perceive you how you dress in appropriate circumstances, you are being judged on your English language skills through your punctuation spacing, a basic requirement.


I see you have a good vocabulary and you use them appropriately.  With a bit more work through reading etc, you will be able to master this difficult language of too many exceptions.  Of course, I don't know how long it took you to write this.  It does not matter, ideas are independent of language.  Good work and a pleasure to correct.

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Each has a one-off lifetime

I used to dislike learning foreign languages,as I thought it is useless to spend time to learn a foreign language.I never thought of going abroad.In fact,I'm interested in biology and physics,I seldom take the time to learn English.Until I went to Hongkong,and met a man who have changed my mind.He is a coach driver,and can speak a fluent English.He told me many things which had opened my eyes,what impressed me most is:"If we're growing, we're always going to be out of our comfort zone."
Indeed,You will never know how strong you are until one day you have no alternatives except for being strong.I want to struggle for a better future.Each has a one-off lifetime,I don't want to walk this life prosaically.Now,I have to admit I was short-sighted that time.The world is large,and the view is great! There are many places I want to go,and many things I want to do.Here,I want to tell myself,surely you won't waste this precious chance to lead your life in vain.

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