Paris suburbs

Hello,

I'm living at the live north of Paris, in the suburbs. My department is the Val d'Oise, (to note,: a department is a fFrench territorial devision). In the Val d'Oise, we have a pretty nice river ; Oise. In summer, it's very wonderful to go in to Auvers sur Oise and visit this picturesque town. This town is very famous because Van Gogh lived the rest last years of his live life before to committing suicide in a hostel, that which you can visit. This impressionist painter was very impressive in his art, his paintings really catch a moment with true colors and atmosphere.
Nowadays, you could also visit Impressionist Museum.
What else is there in Val d'Oise ?
The celebrated Renaissance museum taking place is located in the pretty castle of Ecouen.
It's a very peaceful place where you can make the most of the garden, and by liying you lying on grass, reading a book and feeling a soft breeze on your skin. That It is a true pleasure like to be sat sit on the Oise's riverbanks comtemplating the barges and swans.

Thanks to fix my mistakes, it will be very lovely.:)
Best regards

Brice, This was very good. I made a few corrections and tried not to change too much of your original text.