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也许是因为前几天立冬了，今天夜里我突然梦见下雪了。雪, 像柳絮一般的雪，像芦花一般的雪，像蒲公英一般的雪在空中舞，在随风飞。是不是我的心在默默地留恋家乡的风光呢?
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也许是因为前几天刚过立冬了，今天夜里我突然梦见下雪了。雪, 像柳絮一般的雪，像芦花一般的雪，像蒲公英一般的雪在空中舞，在随风飞。是不是我的心在默默地留恋怀念家乡的风光呢?
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应怜咏絮才！
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“雪, 像柳絮一般的雪，像芦花一般的雪，像蒲公英一般的雪在空中舞，在随风飞。”好美的意境。“缘何吟余忽惆怅，村桥原树似吾乡”。
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也许是因为前几天立冬了，今天夜里我突然梦见下雪了。雪, 像柳絮一般的雪，像芦花一般的雪，像蒲公英一般的雪在空中舞，在随风飞。是不是我的心在默默地想念家乡的风光呢?
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Very' good ，Even a native Chinese cant write such a brautiful composition！
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