My original romantic chinese poem

我看看你
你看看我
下月，你去在我很远
我不快乐
我眼睛有眼泪

it's not meant to make you cry but its using what I know to make a 爱诗

hi, according to what u want to say , i make some adjustment ...

我看着你   (im not sure that which action you want to express , 看着 means stare at 看看 it is like : look again and again )

你看着我

下个月，你将去离我很远的地方

我不快乐

我眼睛里有眼泪

 and we call love letter as 情诗 

if you dont mind making too much adjustment .... 

你凝视着我

我凝视着你

下个月

你将远行

我不快乐

我眼里有泪

My original romantic chinese poem

我看着你
你看看我
下月，你去在我很远
我不快乐
我眼睛里有眼泪

it's not meant to make you cry but its using what I know to make a 爱诗