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A Real Story One day three years ago, when I was walking on my way to library of my school for some reading, with emotion sunk like a stone hanging under my heart, sunshiny as it was though, the surroundings seemed dazzling from the light and I, just had a quarrel with my girlfriend for her coldness with our love, confusing me for a long time and eventually explored by a cold war without any linguistic black powder, which I decided to get away from her for several weeks to see her real feeling about me, and also left me some time to reflect on my own. All of a sudden, a black car, looking nice and shining, stopped by me and the car door opened with a woman's head out and towards me, said:” Do you need a laptop? Come on in!" I heard my voice inner my chest: “wtf, leave me alone!”, but showing my smile as the real, and said:” no need, thank you". And then, the driver rolled down the car window and extended his bald head, of which I’d like to count the hairs, “come on in, you'll not regret”, which for now turns out to be a ink on my pure and white life cloth. I moved my butt reluctantly into his car facing that weird expression from the lady and thought: I would for sure put your trick on the table, both of you. In the beginning, that woman turned on the laptop in her two hands holding tightly, at the moment the man started to ask me some boring questions and told me that I was lucky because a notebook computer which was purchased extra by his big company, and he, as the assistant of his general manager, carried the task to sell this excellent one for a low price of 2000 RMB, and I was that luck man who suited it well. I knew he was a liar, as I watched lots of news about this trick from television and started to get bored. And then she showed me its configuration of some kind of high level which I need to admit I was idiot about it. What I was really thinking at that time was how to uncover their masks, and then I started to play trick on them as well to be as the best return. (To be continued XD)

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Yes, where is part 2? :DDD
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A Real Story

One day three years ago, when I was walking/on the way to my school library of my school for some reading, with my heart  heavy and dark with emotion sunk like a stone hanging under my heart, although the sun was shining and the light was dazzling.  sunshiny as it was though, the surroundings seemed dazzling from the light and I had just had a quarrelled with my girlfriend for her coldness with our love, confusing me for a long time and eventually explored by a cold war without any verbal fireworks/linguistic black gunpowder, which so I decided to get away from her for several weeks to see her real feelings about me, and also left me give myself some time to reflect on my own.
All of a sudden, a black car, looking nice and shinying, stopped by me and the car door opened with and a woman poked her head out and a  woman's head out and towards me, said to me:” Do you need a laptop? Come on in!" I heard my voice inner my chest: “wtf, leave me alone!”, but showing my pretending to smile as the real, and said I replied:” no need, thank you". And Then, the driver rolled down the car window and extended poking out his bald head (of which I’d like to count the hairs), “come on in, you'll not regret it”, which for now turns out to be a ink on my pure and white life cloth (words that proved to become a stain on my unblemished reputation???) (don't get this, cannot correct it sorry). I moved my butt reluctantly into his car facing that the woman (who had a weird expression on her face) from the lady and thought: I would for sure put your trick on the table, both of you. In the beginning, To begin with, that woman turned on the laptop holding it tighly in her two hands holding tightly, at the moment and the man started to ask me some boring questions and told me that I was lucky because a surplus notebook computer which was purchased extra by his big company, and he, as the assistant of his general manager, carried took on the task to sell of selling this excellent one for a low price of 2000 RMB, and I was that the lucky man who suited it well. I knew he was a liar, as I watched lots of news about this such tricks from television and started to get bored. And Then she showed me its configuration of some kind of at a high technical level about which I need to admit I was am an ignoramus idiot about it. What I was really thinking at that time was how to uncover remove their masks, and then I started to play a trick on them as well, to get the better of them be as the best return. (To be continued XD)

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Where is part 2? :D

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