Your dearest
Your heart beats faster,
it is beating in the rhythm of love.
You feel love in every part of your body.
You see the world from a new angle.
Every word from your dearest
helps you to recover, to cheer you up,
to make you sad or laugh.
You like the way your dearest thinks, acts,
walks, dreams, speaks, laughs.
You know whether your dearest is sad or happy.
Often words aren’t enough, but looking into the eyes
of your dearest is enough to show you
all good things from the past, present and future.
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Your dearest
Your heart beats faster,it is beating in the rhythm of love.
You feel love in every part of your body.
You see the world from a new angle.
Every word from your dearest
helps you to recover, to cheer you up,
to make you sad or laugh.
You like the way your dearest thinks, acts,
walks, dreams, speaks, laughs.
You know whether your dearest is sad or happy.
Often words aren’t enough, but looking into the eyes
of your dearest is enough to show you
all good things from the past, present and future.
Absolutely beautiful and perfect. Amazing. I'm charmed.
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it makes me want to send her a msg right now. I like the feeling. ----Carlisle
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so sweet =p lol...too bad, I still haven't found the right one for me yet T.T
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Thank you :) you should be happy every day as well^^ Try it
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your writting is really good, hope you happy every day .
-----Aline
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