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what I is angel what if i is angel i can help they and i very happy ! one day ! i don't shy i will study Eng lish and speak Eng liah who can help me now i will by speak English study words

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Note:

In English, each new sentence should begin with a capital letter.

Each sentenece should end with a period or question mark.

Capitalizing letters and adding periods and question marks help the reader understand your thought. If you don't add these two things, it will be difficult to know your sentence starts or ends.

 

 

what What if I is were an angel (When you use the English word "if" you are talking about past tense, so you must always use a verb that means the past.

Say this>> "If I were at home,"

Don't say>>> "If I am at home,"

 

what What if i is were an angel, i I can could help they people, and i this would make me very happy! one One day ! i don't I won't be shy because i I will study Eng lish and speak Eng liah English. Are there any angels who can could help me now i will by speak English and study words?

 

The reason why I added "Are there any angels" before who could help me ..." is to connect your first sentence to the last sentence. So now the first sentnece, "What if I were an angel" and the last sentence "Are there any angels" can relate.

 

 

What if i were an angel, I could help people, and this would make me very happy! One day, I won't be shy because I will study and speak English. Are there any angels who could help me study and speak English?

 

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Your post was difficult to understand but I tried my best to help correct your writing because I want to encourage you to keep trying. 加油

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