Life in Chad (1)—— Landscape

Hello, my friends!
This is my second article written in Talki. After deep thought, I decided to make my notebook an English journal. I'll share everything here that I feel no matter how interesting, boring, or even terrible!
I have to say, for a Chinese person the life in Chad is rough, particularly working in a factory. But you know, my friends, we must discover the beautiful side of life and keep a heart of optimism, no matter how difficult life is! Right?! Today I took photos of the sky when the African sun went back to sleep. :) Actually, I took a lot of picturesque views to share with you, but I can only upload one of them, what a pity!
By the way, I wanna thank the first nice lady, Anna, who helped me with corrections and comments. :)
I hope everyone who reads these words has had a nice day ! :)

The picture is beautiful, my friend! You used "the" before nouns a couple of times incorrectly. I think you just need practice with that. Proper nouns are always capitalized. For example, China, Coca-Cola, December, and also I. Pay attention to verb tenses. Taking pictures is something that is finished and over, so it is past tense. When you use the word "after" the verb will almost certainly be past tense. The word "wish" is usually used for something very unlikely or impossible. For example, you wish for a miracle or you wish you could see the future.

I hope that was helpful. May you keep your optimism and determination. You can do it. We are rooting for you (which is an expression to say we are cheering for you). :)

Life in Chad (1)—— Landscape

Hello, my friends!
This is my second article written in Talki. After a deep thinking deeply, I decided to make my notebook an English journal. I'll share all of the news here that I feel,  no matter if it's interesting, boring, even terrible!
I have to say, for a Chinese, the life in Chad is rough, particularly working in a factory. But you know, my friends, we must discover the beautiful side of the life and keep an optimistic heart, no matter how difficult the life is! Right?! Today I'll take the photos of the sky when the African sun goes back to sleep. :) Actually, I've taken a lot of picturesque views to share with you, but I can just upload one of them, what a pity !
By the way, I want to thank for the first nice lady, Anna, for the first time, who helped me with corrections and comments. :)
I wish everyone who reads these words had a nice day ! :)

[Good work.  I hope it doesn't get too hot there.  That is my problem working around the equator.]