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My poor thoat I have been to the doctor to check my throat today. My mom and I arrived the hospital quite early, but there were so many people waited outside the room, and there was a screen in the wall that is showing names. The doctor in the room was controling that screen by a computer, so that screen can showing on and calling people’s name ,then the people who were called can go in the room to see the doctor. We waited for a long long time, then it finally called my name. The doctor has a mirror thing on her head. I knew this thing, my dad has one is the same. It can reflects lights in people’s ears ,throat and nose, so the doctor can see clear. The doctor saw in my throat and put her hand in side my mouth to touched the meat grow in my throat that made me nearly throwed up. Then she said it is my tonsil got sick, it already got fat, if it keep growing, she was afraid I should get a operation. So she gave me some medicine for a week and also told me that I can’t eat spicy… I wanted to ask more questions, but many other patients always came in and the doctor was too busy to talk to me. That is one reason I hate the hospitals in China. So I came back home and trying to take one week medicine, if it still can’t go better, I think I should go back a doctor who is cured my nose disease. I just worried that I can’t singing well anymore. I also should go back to GYM to working out more to make my body strong enough to fight the virus.

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My poor thoat

I have been went to the doctor to check my throat today. My mom and I arrived the hospital quite early, but there were so many people waited waiting outside the room., and t There was a screen in on the wall that is showing all the names. The doctor in the room was controling that screen by with a computer, so that the screen can would showing on and calling people’s names., then tThe people who were called can would go in the room to see the doctor.


We waited for a long, long time, then until it finally called my name. The doctor has had a mirror thing device on her head. I knew this device thing, because my dad has one. is the same. It can reflects lights in people’s ears, throat and nose, so the doctor can see clearly. The doctor saw into my throat and put her hand in the side of my mouth to touched the meat grow flesh in my throat, which that made me nearly throwed up. Then she said, it is was my tonsil that got me sick., it It was already got fat., iIf it keept growing, she was afraid I'd need should get an operation. So she gave me some medicine for a week and also told me that I can’t couldn't eat spicy food. … I wanted to ask more questions, but many other patients always were coming came in and the doctor was too busy to talk to me. That is one reason I hate the hospitals in China.


So I came back home and am trying to take one week the medicine for one week., if If it I still don't can’t go get better, I think I should go back to the a doctor who is cured my nose disease. I just worried worry that I can’t won't singing sing well anymore. I also should go back to the gym GYM to working out more to and make my body strong enough to fight the virus.

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I sincerely hope you will soon recover

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