Hi Kate -- I just joined Italki and I saw your notebook entry.  If I were writing your entry, this is how I would do it:

American horror story is the best series from the USA for two reasons.  The series is about the Harmon family, whose members, Ben and Vivien, just moved to L.A.  In there house there, all the people that lived there have died in tragic ways.  Tate is a person that died in the house, and then tried to hurt Vivien.  The series was nominated for best drama, as well as the Golden Globes and the Satellite Awards.  Although it's scary to watch, once you start you can't look away.  American Horror story adds a different twist to the terror genre and brings something new to television.  [Hope this helps!]

American Horror Story

American horror story is the best series of USA, for that this synopsis and two reasons because people like. The series be about the family Harmon where, after of cheats of Ben to Vivien move to L.A. In this house all people that live here dead in various situations tragic. Tate is a people that dead in the house, then treat of make damage to Vivien but is act fast of Violet. Nominate to best series drama, for the golden globes and Satellite Awards get to people like this series. Although, cause scary don't can leave seen it and intrigue from the first moment.America horror story reach for give to a new look to the series of terror, indeed something different to the TV.