About me
Im a very shy person, so, thats why i have like 3 best friends, but they are really the best. I love reading, go to movies, traveling and learn new languages, im actually living in Mexico, i like my country so much because it has lots of things to do and touristic places for visit, about my dreams, i would like go to other country and learn about other cultures, i would love go to Ireland and Scotland, as the begining. I was living in Vancouver, Canada, for 1 year and a half and 2 months ago i came back home. Im living with my parents and siblings, 3 brothers and 2 sisters, i love Vancouver, is an amazing city but for me the best place in the world is definitly, home.
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instead of "other cultures" use " their cultures" it seems good, what you say ?
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Mexico is one of my eight must-to-go countries.
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hahaha, yes, now i know it, I´m inventing new words :P, thanks for your help!!
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I've never actually heard the word "touristic". We normally say "tourist destinations"
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About me
I'm a very shy person, so that's why I have like 3 best friends, but they are really the best. I love reading, going to movies, traveling and learning new languages. I'm actually living in Mexico. I like my country so much because it has lots of things to do and tourist places for visit. About my dreams: I would like go to other countries and learn about other cultures. I would love go to Ireland and Scotland, to begin with. I was living in Vancouver, Canada, for 1 year and a half and 2 months ago I came back home. I'm living with my parents and siblings, 3 brothers and 2 sisters. I love Vancouver. It is an amazing city, but for me the best place in the world is definitely home.
[Good work. Shorten your sentences and remember that the pronoun 'I' is always capitalized.]
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